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A First Time For Anything
by Pamela

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Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 01/31/10
Another bad story!
Silvia.
Comment by Anne Zvesteit on 10/02/08
I didn't buy the protagonist giving in so easily on changing clothes in his boss' office, but the blowjob description was fantastic!  I'd like to read more from these three characters.
Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/17/08
I think the story was funny but that is sexual harassment, if MR. May had fired him, because he told him to put the underwear on in the first place. But i thought it was funny. But i write better remember some times great writers have TROUBLE getting PUBLISHED, because agents and publishers have no IMAGINATION.
Comment by Mary Kay on 06/26/08
A delightful description of giving a blow job.   I have only done it once and I was dressed and it is a memorable experience.  I hope you write more stories.

Mary Kay9

Comment by Wendi Robertson on 06/22/08
Looking for your new story I realized I had never commented on "A First Time for Anything."

I love that story and read it again and again. I used to shop for girdles and bras (often) when I was Gregory's age.  Oh, to have been so cornered by the powerful wife of my powerful boss.

How delightful and it strikes exactly the right erotic chord for me.

Comment by Yvette on 04/30/08
loved the story. I love girdles and control panties ...right up my alley
Comment by Brooke on 09/23/07
One word "WONDERFUL" please write more soon...
Comment by Talon DeRojo on 09/22/07
Pamela - I really enjoyed 'A First Time For Anything'. Good story and character development. I hope that you continue the story of Gregory's exploration of crossdressing and his sexual exploits with his boss and, perhaps, the boss's wife.
Talon
Comment by Cassandra on 09/17/07
Pamela,

I totally enjoyed this story. I will await Chapter 2 of this lovely adventure. Your touch and texture on this installment were just delicious.

Cassandra

Comment by Sarah H. on 09/14/07
Nice story. Please continue with his adventure. I'm sure that it willget even better for our hero(ine).


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