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A Fitting Revenge
by Prissy

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Comment by dawney on 04/03/16
I do hope that someone will continue the story as would like to find out how emma enjoys being a girl

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Comment by priscilla  pinkpanties on 06/09/12
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm  i would luv a group of women to do this to me. i would submit anytime.

Comment by Silvia. on 01/31/12
Ridiculous, disgusting!

Comment by tony on 11/17/11
hey i would love to meet girls like this and transform me into a girl

Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/23/08
CRUEL, THE GIRLS SHOULD BE ARRESTED AND PUT AWAY, THIS SUBJECT HAS TO BE DONE WITH LOVE OR THE OTHER COMMENT IS RIGHT HE WILL KILL HIMSELF.

Comment by juliej on 03/09/08
well worth continuing good story more please

Comment by Dianna on 03/02/08
the punishment didn't fit the crime, and your formatting is HORRIBLE sugar, it makes things so difficult to read.

By the way hun, someone in this situation, forced and humiliated would eventually start contemplating suicide. Love is important because it keeps the victim alive, but if the person has no love for their self and no external source, they turn self-destructive.

I really hope you address this in a carefully thought out manner, and not a 'oh well I was bad so I deserve this' manner.


Comment by juliej on 01/17/08
as per my previous comments

Comment by juliej on 12/09/06
yes this must be continued please donot leave us hanging onedge for more this can go such a far way it should happen in real ife a brilliant start to this story

Comment by prissypeta on 03/30/05
A great story. I don't think the use of chemicals and gadgets was over the top in fact I'd like to hear more. Let's condition him to be a complete slut using hypno tapes but he must still be aware he's a boy and feel the humiliation of his enforced girlhood.

Comment by julie j on 10/25/04
i agree please continue with this story there is so much more you can do with it well done please write more soon

Comment by susie-ann on 04/23/04
Please continue with the story; I can't wait for the second chapter.

Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 02/19/03
Prissy, this is a good first chapter. The formatting was a little unusal, but I was able to read and enjoy it. I just can't wait for the second chapter.

Barbara Lynn Terry

Comment by Allie on 02/19/03
This is a great start to a story and despite the rough formatting I'm really looking forward to the second episode.

Comment by chris on 02/18/03
i liked it very much cant wait for the second part

Comment by Alana1960 on 02/17/03
Nice revenge fantasy. The girls having drugs and devices to change him is a bit over the top but I can accept it here.

The format is a bit rough. Paragraphs do help.

Continue it. I want to see how far you want this character to go.

Alana

Comment by raj   patel on 02/16/03
i liked this story very much , i wish i was that boy who was forced into womenhood and was been teased as a girl in school by cute boys i like to see more of this story

Comment by Moolie on 02/15/03
Learn about paragraphs. Very hard to read. Didn't finish it because of that.

Comment by Cindy_69 on 02/15/03
I want to see the main character start doing things on her own and unable to stop because of the hypnosis tapes.
-checking out/doing boys
-putting on girlier clothes skirts heels/shopping
-getting her hair nails done

Comment by guess on 02/14/03
Do a better job of formatting the story.  It is very hard to read

Comment by Pervette on 02/14/03
I thought you stretched plausibility a bit too far, with all those
illicit chemicals.  And the punishment seemed excessive compared
with the crime.  Forced fem. stories are fun, but for me they have
to be believable.  Others' mileage may vary.


--Pervy

Comment by Axanar on 02/13/03
Continue it?  Absolutely?



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