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  Just occasionally, far too infrequently, I find a story with that 'What happens next ?" factor which makes it impossible to stop reading until the end of the story is reached. This is one of those stories and it achieves this status without resorting to any long sex dialogue which some readers find so offensive. Congratulations.

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I'll keep it simple and to the point as I can see no where to point out anything to who I perceive to be an accomplished writer. Hell Yah!! Excellent story.  

I couldn't stop reading.  This would be an awesome James Bond theme.  It was very well written and the story progressed beautifully from one part to another.    Thank you for a great story.

Hi Maddie!
You're great, and I LOVED your story. You're a terrific writer!
I hope that Gabbie makes the SRS and is a complete woman for Bax.
Write more quickly!
I love you, kisses and hugs!
Silvia.

Hell i skipped dinner, i could not stop i say Bravo,Bravo

Thank you for such an interesting story.I hated to put it down to eat my dinner.I enjoyed all the characters and your writing style.     thanks again, Joe                      

A thoroughly enjoyable and well written story. It held me right up to the last word. Well done.

Wonderful, romantic, action-packed adventure story.  What more could a girl ask for!

Thanks for all the great comments. It's great knowing that I've written something that someone else can enjoy. I love hearing what people think about my work whether good or bad. The ego boost isn't bad, either. Let me know if you'd like to hear more of my stories. Thanks, again!!

A truly nice story, I enjoyed it a great deal. Just wish it had been a little longer, but it's just the kind of story I enjoy reading.

 Oh WOW!!!! What a story,and what a talent for storytelling you have. I am envious of your obvious talent and could wish for half of it. An excellent story well told, that left me looking for more.
 Love and hugs
   Elsa.b

Wow!  I just finished this wild ride of a story and have to tell you how much I enjoyed it.  The intrigue, the excitement, the danger, and most of all the love between Bax and Gabbie.  Well done!  

I hope you will write many more stories.  You obviously have quite a skill at doing so.

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Let me add my congratulations on your story.  You set out a big challenge for yourself in weaving both a physical and psychological transformation into a single piece with an action thriller.  Like a lot of the thriller genre, details of plot and some of the broad-brush characterizations probably wouldn't stand up to too close scrutiny. But then, what kind of a fool would try to deconstruct a  Jackie Chan movie? ;-)

Anyway, I'm not going to nitpick it.  I enjoyed it very much.
......Tamara.

Wow great story.

Let me be the first to congragulate you on a very well written story and one that held my interest throughout.  It was delightful and wish you well in your later endevors at writing, which I hope you do a lot of.  Respectfully, a grateful fan.