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For A Dream To Come True
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Graceland on 12/13/11
Thanks guys, I just about lost it lokonig for this.

Comment by Diane Morrill on 10/12/09
Don't know what to make of this one, but I must disagree with the prior two 'comments.'
It is my guess, based upon personal writing experience and the catharsis evolving out of each story, that very few stories of the nature found in these pages are written for the readers, but for the writers living out their lives through creating what "might have been or could be."

Comment by Dianna on 03/19/08
I'm sorry Mrs.Brock, but I have to strongly disagree. There wasn't anything 'cute' about that story, not even remotely.

Comment by Jennifer Brock on 08/04/05
That was a fun story.  The plot was fairly believable, and the characters felt real enough.  You could easily imagine what would be happening next to them.

I'm just not sure why such a cute little story got an "X" rating.



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