I also don't think the kid is going to hate his mom to the degree the story suggests. It would be more like a confusion on the kids part. When I was in the 6th grade my little brother got in a fight at the playground about half a block (roughly 200 yards) from my house. There was a large crowd around the fight. Of course I didn't know if I should get into it also or go get my dad. I chose to do the responsible thing (I thought it was) and go get my dad. When we got there he broke up the fight and then asked me why I went to go get him. And that is when I saw the disappointment on my dads face. I have this thing in my head that tells me everyone is marshalled against me. I KNOW logically that isn't true but years of being bullied and hearing laughter as it happens will do that to anyone. My point is the kid didn't feel he had a family just like I went from feeling it was me(/us) against the world to being just me against the world. I never hated my dad but I learned not to count on him.

Now this story calls for elucidation. I'm quite certain the kid knew the cops were looking for him. Or did his mother not care? Really there are two sides to every story though I'm quite certain the mother was overreacting. Girls think boys are silly and boys think girls are silly and sometimes that carries over to adulthood. Are we not all entitled to our opinion no matter how wrong it may be?

I liked your story and will read it again.

mother comes into bedroom boy is playing&TALKING to barbie the doll looks up, mother says what you doing I thought you said that was silly,MOTHER!!! YOU put me into these clothes said not to get dirty what's a boy to do.yea I was wrong about being silly, barbie makes more sence then you do and she hasent said any thing yet.then I left

I like the dark tone of your stories. Please go on developing this theme -- I like your other stories too. Light stories are fun fantasies, but these dark stories hint at the deeper truths that are there for those of us whose parents darkened our childhoods in these ways.

Mom lost her son when she forced girl hood on him. I hope tat boy meets Aunt Jane of Seasons House series. She will help him.  

this was a very good story but to short i must say that there are a number of spelling mistakes that make hard reading but ienjoyed the story i wish it was a bit longer & explained a bit more

Ithink that if you decide to do more of this type of story they will be very well recieved and i look forword to more of this story an excellent read

I liked your stories, however, I dislike the "dark" endings to both.  I think most readers come to this page for a brief "escape" from reality.  Your endings, although probably accurate in the potential for damage to a young man, strike to close to a harsher reality.  By the way, were you the little Ice Princess in the story?  Was that part true?  Sounds adorable.

Mistress Cindi,

   A good and interesting story, but probably would be better if some of the scenes expanded and made more descriptive. Perhaps encountering some of his friends when he was trick-or-treating or adding a few more sequences of him dressed in girl's clothes for various occasions.

   Ditto on spellcheck and editing.

   Jennifer

I can only echo the other comments here.  Good work.  Ask for a
hand from one of the other authors here and get your story proof
read.  Still it is a well planned story and thought provoking.

Well written. I only wish other reviewers with axes to grind over domination fantasies wouldn't use such stories as didactic devices to caution us about the horrors of forced sex.

Those of us who enjoy such fantasies, even at their most brutal, are well aware that in reality non-consensual abuse is seldom enjoyable, and virtually never excusable.

On the other hand, you will never convince us that in fantasy it isn't the hottest thing going. That's just the way we're wired. Kind of like being wired in this whole tg way.

A story closer to the truth about the feelings created in a normal boy when forced to dress as a girl. This could almost classed as good boy to bad boy not the usual bad boy to good girl. It could use a good proofreader but the message is there quite clear.

Ahhhhhh, this story was breath of fresh air. It shows the other side of the coin. The child abuse down to this GUY was terrible. It shows that being forced into a mold that is not your gender. We need more stories like this.
BTW the English teachers here are right, more spell check and editing would be good. It did not detract from the story for me though.
Keep up the Good Work
Love and Warmth
Pickles

Finally, a story that's closer to the truth than many of us want to admit. The psychic injury that can be done will last a lifetime. Would be better if you changed your 'nym!
With me, "Mistress" leaves a bad taste in my mouth.

I would have liked to see this from the mother's point of view.  Did she know why he ran?  Was she remorseful after he ran? Did she try to find him?  Did she need psychiatric help after they couldn't find him, etc?

not a big fan of force stories but wouldn't of minded at that kid age to be dragged into the girls department of the store.

I am not a big fan of forced anything stories.  But, as you pointed out in your story, being forced into a role that is not of your choice and certainly one that you don't enjoy, can have very negative consequences.    If this is your goal for your stories, then continue to write such stories.

As Robyn pointed out, don't forget to run your story through the spell checker.  I always use the spell checker because I type fast and a lot of time I will transpose letters (as well as just plain errors :-).)  If your word processor doesn't have a spell checker, there are third party add ons that work well.

A concept seen many times before, but always welcomed. Editing and spellcheck would have made the story easier to read, however.