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For Love and Money
by Jennifer White

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Comment by juliej on 07/26/07
how dumb canyou get what a stupid person but the story was well written &enjoyable more please your stories are about differnet modes and themes it great how you work with words and change the stories well to be different

Comment by Early June on 01/05/06
Talk about stupid people!!  He was so dumb-- How dumb was he-- that he couldn't make a life on his own.  He was lucky this horrible woman sheltered him and gave a purpose to his life.  Without her he would have starved to death exposed to the elements.

Another piece that captures the imagination and lets the reader feel the victims plight.   Thank you for posting this.

Comment by Calamariee on 01/01/06
Once again, you write what I like to read.... Thank you.



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