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For Those With A Short Attention Span...
by Minty Fresh

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Comment by Johnny on 08/10/12
Oh, if only......

Lovely story!


Comment by Silvia. on 12/19/09
Bad story.
Silvia.

Comment by Mistress Meredith on 06/18/09
My sissy maid priscilla ann, who commented over a year and a half ago, is right in wondering what minty did to deserve such humiliating punishment. While I cannot answer that question, I will say it is obvious it must've been something so bad that minty must well deserve her mortifying new life. Unfortunately, however, is that it appears she cannot recall why she is being punished, or who she was. And that's too bad, since those recollections would enhance her punishment and humiliation 100 fold.

Comment by whyguys on 04/01/09
I love the taunting attitude of the Females in this story fragment.... but as others have mentioned more explanation and/or background is needed.   The male involved is shown wonderfully broken and degraded, but it would have more impact seeing from what loftier position he had been toppled.

MORE PLEASE!


Comment by Priscilla Ann on 01/24/08
I wonder what minty did to deservse his/her (obvious) punishment. Great little story with wonderfully utterly humiliating punishment for sissy minty.

Comment by juliej on 01/26/06
i feel this is only a fragment i would like to read how it all began whether it was forced or otherwise its also to short a goodreview is required to bring it into a being of a good story the idea is good but we need to know far more good try

Comment by Axanar on 01/23/06
I love these types of stories but this one isn't really anything more than a fragment.  Don't get me wrong--it's a terrific ENDING.  But we get no idea of the feminization process or whatever.  

Had this been a male exec, a former boss our of work and desperate, brainwashed, fighting it, losing and finally accepting his feminization and new name, what you have here would have been the perfect conclusion.  But as it stands, we have no idea this is even a male.  Why not add more to the front and close it with what you have here?



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