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Fortune Cookie
by Wanda Cunningham

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Comment by a fan on 09/24/04
Your 'Kelly' story is wonderful.  How soon will we see Book 2?  
Hopefully with 'hormones', etc.  Keep her moving along.
Comment by Misty Dawn on 07/07/04

    Wanda I do believe you are doing a wonderful job with Kelly and krew.  I want you to know that I love this tale and the direction it isd heading,  My opnly dis is that is seems to drag occasionally, as in tyhe length of time it takes Barbie to realize her son is in serious danger, in the amount of time it is taking to learn what Phill and Amanda are doing and how their past is going to interact with Kelly and crew.  

   overall it is a fasntantasy we all would love to experience and I can hardly wait to enjoy the day at DisneyLand with the Mann crowd.  I love the developing turmoil with Cheryl toward Kelly and look forward to her reactions when she finally meets Kelly and like all the rest of us falls head over for her.  I for one hope you have Barbier see the light and opt for tghe reasonable size breasts...no more than a full "C".  *G*.  Please process more of this delight ASAP!

Misty
Comment by Michelle on 04/18/04
Kelly girl is progressing nicely, waiting for the next chapter...
wonderful!
Michelle
Comment by Tamara Rand on 04/13/04
Dear Wanda:
I realize this story has been on the Storysite for many months, but it was only yesterday that I stumbled across it.  Even so, I couldn't resist writing to say that "Fortune Cookie" may just be the best story I've read here (and My Dear, I've read a *lot* of them). So subtle, so poignant, so tender -- and so true.  I've enjoyed some of your other efforts, too, but "Fortune Cookie" just strikes me as something really, really special.  Thank you for your generosity in sharing it with us.  Sincere best wishes,
......Tamara.
Comment by solon on 12/04/03
This is kind of story that hints of what God (be there such a person) must see all time....humans acting out their lives on their little stages, always hungering for something that often right there for taking. If only we could know at 16 what we know at 60.....
Excellent little story Wanda.
sigh
Comment by Mr. Ram on 07/18/03
Not really TG, but very very good!

Thanks!

Mr. Ram
Comment by Jezzi stewart on 07/18/03
What a sad story, but a very real life story in a world where magic is only in fiction.
Comment by Dozy on 07/18/03
Wow! A subtle story that lets the reader fill in what the narrator left unsaid and unthought. I'll be thinking about it for a much longer time than it took to read. Thank you.


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