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Fortune Teller
by Lorna Samuels

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Comment by buy cheap oem software on 02/12/12
IjaMV1 Sent the first post, but it wasn't published. I am writing the second. It's me, the African tourist..

Comment by Silvia     (from Brazil) on 09/08/09
Hi Lorna, You're a good writer, and I liked this story.
Keep writing, because we can always enjoy your stories.  
Kisses and hugs.
Silvia.

Comment by Jo-Anne on 03/24/09
A nice story, although exasperating in that the male character is a real wimp. Whiny, doubting, ungrateful, thick. The end is contrived and you could see it coming from a mile away.

Still it's a nice story. The flow is quite al right, dialogue is good. Yeah, it's an okay tale.

Jo-Anne


Comment by chris2 on 05/21/07
great story .



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