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The Fountain of Youth
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Comment by k mixon on 06/19/08
I like the format,and how it was so layed out in a nautical style. Comment by Mysti on 04/04/04 I see some possibilities here. If the water actually does rejuvenate, why doesn't Heather just go ahead and drink some? More intriguing: what if the water doesn't just change men into women, but changes the sex of anyone, male or female, who drinks it? In that case, Heather and William could, in effect, trade places- and be a lot younger and healthier, to boot. |
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