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The Four Year Plan
by Jennifer White

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Comment by this sheat on 03/04/17
jMmoUS Really informative post.Really looking forward to read more. Fantastic.
Comment by matz crorkz on 12/17/14
7xUiYJ I really liked your post.Really thank you! Cool.
Comment by great link building on 11/20/13
jy69Sp Thanks for the article post. Will read on...
Comment by juliej on 05/02/08
a great story well written another part would be good
Comment by juliej on 07/28/07
a intersting story it very well managed and hth feeling it seems like a whole set up well done
Comment by SassySue on 05/22/07
This was a good story: a variety of sex between a married couple, nothing that they both didn't want and gradual feminization without coersion!  However, I have to agree with everything that Jezzi said (as I often find myself doing :).  IMHO the epilogue ruined what otherwise would have been one of the greatest TG stories ever.  

Also, as I've noted before, for some reason Jennifer has difficulty in spelling "dildo", often leaving out the vowels.  It wouldn't hurt to run a spell checker on what otherwise is a very well written story.

Those nit picks aside, I did enjoy the story and thank Jennifer profusely for writing and posting it.

SS

Comment by Elizabeth on 05/16/07
Great Story - epilog and all.  Thank you!   One of your very best - and I enjoy all your stories.
Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 05/14/07
Damn!  Why did you have to add that epilog?  I was really enjoying a sweet romantic love story of feminization - no force, no brainwashing, nothing he really didn't want, nothing that wasn't accomplished by normal feminine wiles, and she was upfront with him, telling him from the beginning exactly what she wanted, everything done with his knowledge and consent - and me thinking right up to the end that he could have said "No!" whenever he wanted.  Then you had to throw in that epilog revealing that she used hypnosis, and it became the usual road-most-traveled forced femme story.  That took all the love out for me and replaced it with selfishness - although Gina may have made Theresa use the hypnotism.
Comment by Lynette on 05/13/07
I have been reading tv/ts stories on fictionmania and story site for about four years now.
you are by far my favorite author, and in my humble opinion the best. I just finished "Four year plan", It is the best you've ever done, in fact I think it's the best I've ever read. Thank you.                           Lynette


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