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Freak
by Mardee Louise Prynne

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Comment by Silvia     (from Brazil) on 10/20/09
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Silvia.

Comment by (AJ) Eric on 09/20/07
Quite a story.  Probably the most manipulative heroine I've encountered in some time, but virtually everyone else in the story has that same characteristic.  I guess that makes sense, storywise, in order to prevent the reader from rooting for someone besides Allie.  One wonders, though, whether Dan -- not exactly an innocent but to all appearances a real straight shooter -- will be able to cope with her.  The '50s setting works pretty well -- no surprise given the noir-type atmosphere.

Eric




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