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From David to Lucy
by Jennifer

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Comment by  ALISON MARY on 09/05/09
 What a beautiful,sentimental story of a young boy's transition to
femininety and his mother's joy at his happiness.A pleasure to read and enjoy.Thank you so much and may God bless you .ALISON

Comment by Andlat on 08/04/08
What an absolutely delightful story!

Comment by juliej on 05/05/08
a sweet story getting what one wants amazing

Comment by RONE on 06/09/06
 Well done this is a timeless work ....thank you for writing this
and God Bless .....  Rone

Comment by Petti Pie on 12/17/02
Bravo! Bravo!  This is one of the sweetest, gentlest, most precious stories that I've seen in quite in while.  I particularly like the way that the author expresses the various sensations that David experiences from the touch and feeling of the clothes.

The writing is lovely, and I hope we see more from the obviously talented Jennifer!

Comment by Mary on 12/17/02
A sweet story of a boy's mother changing him into a girl. It to bad she didn't love him enough to except him as a boy but needed him to replace his sister.

Mary



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