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From Here To Maternity
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Danielle on 06/04/07
Oh Jennifer:

 Your last story was so good but this one dropped you right back down again.  Where was the proof that he cheated on her. What about her cheating on him and how cruel she was being in the divorce. She stole from him, distanced and even severed his links to his friends, now wants everything else. Where is the justice here. Evil wins again!  Well, why not! Evil is winning the world anyway. I was so dissapointed in this story as I know you can write nice, pleasent transformations without all the hypnosis and mystical bul*shit. You take a way a persons free will (Which was given us as a gift from GOD)you take away the soul. You can't get any more evil than that! I pray that there is a sequel where this poor husband gets his release and that bitch of a wife finally gets hers. Even if I have to write it!


  Very dissapointed.














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