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6iYPie Great post.

the dad sounds alot like mine :( uve captured a good image i think hes gonna love being a girl like alot of people here do :) lol keep up the great writing it helps me escape from "my drunk of a father"

I was born a boy - but all through my childhood - I felt that something was wrong - I used to "borrow" my sisters clothes and wear them in secret
Finally - aged 66 - I went for the op
I am now a happy, 74 year old girl called Diane
So don't give up hope - ever

well it has been good so far but after 5 years of watting have you got part 3 ready to be reposted yet if not how about remove the hole story till it is

great story welll worth reading,next part please

Nice story Rebecca, pretty well constructed, re-writes in a story is always a good idea if the auther is not happy with his or her work.
Try though not to be over critical of your own work, you won't be able to please all readers.

But do not try to worry about that too much, the more you write, the more that you will get better at it, I myself have been writing stories since 1992, they began weak at first, then they became average to realy good peices of work.

All the best with your re-write.

Amy.

brilliant story more please let punishment fit the crime

Well folks, thanks for your support and criticism. I do want to add that when I wrote this - I was in the Army, and had fellow soldiers around, etc. While I wanted to write my storyline out, I was very cautious in doing so and I think the quality of the story suffered as a result.

The end part with the father is the way my dad treated me, my sister and my mom. I was kinda influence by that - and infantilism, well, I have a fatal attraction to being sissy, sweet, feminine to the utmost - but bound and helpless. Forced babification was a natural progression for me. (or regression, as it were)

I've lived a little bit 24/7 as a baby - it was fun. Still, I do note that the stories I post are not only about what I like - and will keep readers thoughts in mind when writing further. Thanks for your feedback. Take care!

-Jess

OK, parts 1 and 2 were good.  3 started off with a promise, then spiraled out of control.  Don't get me wrong.  I liked it.  But the pace picked up way too fast in part three, especially at the end.  

i liked the story but i can understand why the last part was removed i lookforewards to reading the story in due course great writing well done

Jessica, honey,
You write very well.  Your story is a great read.  Am VERY glad that you decided to do your story as you originally intended.  There is NOTHING wrong with the way you write.  Would recommend in the future that you perhaps consider accepting well-meant recommendations (authors cannot think or see everything), and TOTALLY ignore criticism from spiteful fools.  Thank you for sharing your talent.
Sharlee

part 3... baby?
Started out turning bad boy to good girl. what happend?
Maybe bad boy can be allowed to be a big girl and wear the approptiate clothes if he/she acts the part rather than be forced to be a baby.Have him/her select his/her own outfit and dress him/herself
A trip to the salon would be good. have her make the appoinmnet herself. Baby thing just do'nt cut it.

Reading this story is like watching a train wreck. It is fascinating, yet disturbing.

You start off with a story that sounds like it is from the fifties, given the way the girls are dressed. Then you have one boy say "dude", as in, "Hey Dude, is this a period piece or what?"

The story then become somewhat believable in the beginning, except for things like the boy and girl exchanging clothes. The girl would never wear his underwear and it's doubtful she would want to get the cooties from his jeans and shirt. No principal would resort to physical force and keep her job for long. They're masters are making children do what they want, without touching them.

The mother is way overboard spending all that money on clothes when it isn't discretionary income, especially in a dysfunctional family. Nothing like pouring gasoline on her drunk of a husband's fire and throwing her son to the lions by presenting him to his unbalanced dad. Taking the boy to a store would be humiliating, he doesn't need to buy out the place. Extended families are great (and believeable) for getting clothes.

Where on earth did the aunt and mother find a bonnet with a padlock? Sounds to me like the aunt/mother have more problems than the son. Perhaps the next chapter will deal with the mother's humiliation when her son is taken away from her by social workers when the dad reports her for abuse.

You seem to have some talent and ability. Perhaps you should start over and tone things down a tad. Maybe add a little love and compassion.

I know it's fiction, but when I suspend my disbelief I want something in return. When a child is involved in the story I want love and a happy ending. Many of us secretly wished we would have been forced to dress as a girl as a child. None of us really would have wanted the abuse this boy is getting. For this reader a middle of the road approach is needed.

As a writer I like to see my darkest fantasies come to life in my writing. Some like them; some don't.

All you are getting from me is one person's opinion and a recommendation that you write more.

Much love to you. I hope your story isn't biographical.

Jill M I

Jessica Dear,

How could you do this to a wonderful story? I am really disappointed with Part 3. With all this in place, Rebecca's mom has lost a wonderful opportunity to have a loving and caring daughter. The humiliation has a ring of preplanning. It certainly has no place in this story! Bad enough a drunk for a father and now a Bitch for an aunt.

Sorry dear! My advise is to give up the story right now.

Cassandra

After part 3:  
I'm REALLY disappointed.  This went downhill pretty fast from a fairly believable story to just rediculous with the overdone baby humiliation.  From somewhat believable punishment (except for the ear piercing)by a mom who loved and wanted to correct her son to child abuse (laxative in the milk, wrapping the hands) by cruel bitches.  Just another cruel baby humiliation story.  Also, I didn't know women could lactate on demand; there was no mention of Jon's mom having just had a baby, or that any of this was pre-planned so she could have been taking hormones ahead of time.  

I think Mom has blown her chance of having a loving daughter.  It was obvious that Jonathon did love his mom when he tried to defend her from dad, even though she had dressed him as a girl, and that he could maybe be led to like being a girl - that's the direction I thought the story was going when he voluntarilly started playing nicely with his cousin. But how can he still love her after this really cruel baby stuff?  I do so hope, if the baby stuff continues, that he succeeds in his plan to run away, and that it turns out well for HIM.  The only chance, I think, for reestablishing a good relationship would be if in the morning, they tell him it was only a one day lesson and that if he will be a nice little girl, as he was when he arrived, his cousin will not torment him and the baby stuff will not happen again.  I'd like to see Rebecca and "her" cousin agree to let bygones be bygones and become girlfriends.

One other comment, after reading Part 2: so WONDERFUL to see a
writer who knows how to use "enormity" correctly!  The enormity
of the day is clearly how dreadfully awful the day was.  So many
people these days use "enormity" as if it meant "enormousness."
The last person to get it right was a friend who used it in the
course of describing his escape from the World Trade Center....
.
--Pervy

Dear, this is a nice story with some very interestings twists. Jezzi pointed out the first. The second is the attitude of the Father. I thought his compliance, albeit drunken was a little to quick. There is obvioiusly more to Mom than meets the eye. Shopping at Nordstrom's is a dead give away to the discretionary money in the household.I wonder why Rebecca is in public school? No matter, I'm enjoying the story immensely.

after part 2
Mom's pretty diabolical.  She's his tormentor and humiliator one moment and his protector the next, good cop/bad cop all in one.  What a way to keep him off balance and compliant, and the road less traveled than the "Act like a girl to keep your secret." bit.   I would like to see a detailed salon visit  for "the works".

Hey, what happend? where's the rest of the story?

Hi, we are impatiantly waiting for the next chapter. I hope there is one. :)

I really enjoyed this story.I've always liked the idea that a boy has to switch clothes with a girl,it adds to the humiliation!I hope you keep Susan involved,and can't wait to read more!

Mom should take rebbecca to a department store such as Sears in the girls department. A department no boy would be caught dead in. there he would be forced to act the 'girl' part or humiliate himself.

Mom could even give him the cahnce to chose to go to a distant mall away from where he might run into friends if he promised to do as he is told and act 'properly'

She could be 'her'her first bra. young girls are usually quite excited and cooperative. Rebecca could be rquired to pick one out.

Mom and daughter can shop for shoe's and pantyhose (garterbelt and stockings depending on the time era)

Rebecca would also have to be introduced to the "lady's" and taught the proper way to use the toilet

Of course there would be multiple purchases, just to let Rebbeca know that she could be in dresses for a while, if she/he does not learn to behave.
   

As usual, Jezzi has said it all, & better than I could have.  One
little point: the guy who runs the school is the principAL.  When
we were in school, they told us to remember that a principLE is a
ruLE, while the PrinciPAL was (it was to be hoped) your PAL.
.
If we have a vote here on how the story proceeds, my vote is for
feminization rather than infantilization.
.
--Pervy

Nice beginning.Why wasn't I this lucky when I was naughty?

I couldn't see this happening today, but, leaving out the ear piercing, I could see it happening in the 1950's.  I'm looking forward to part 2.  

My preference would be to keep the threat of diapers to make him behave like a girl his age, maybe be a baby for a day just to show him mom is serious, but mom wants a 10 year old daughter she can bond with, not a baby, and he has to pretend to love doing girly mother/daughter things with her:  They get matching outfits while shopping.  They redecorate "her" room  as girlie as possible and Rebecca has to be a willing, happy participant.  Etc.

wasn't sure by the listed story catagories if I'd like it or not but found it enjoyable