I Thank you for a wonderful story.  I loved it!  I am a trans woman and have often dreamed of being able to wear the beautiful dresses the women of the Middle Ages wore.  Many were breathtaking gorgeous.  If I had met a handsome prince like Prince Christian I would have been happy to live my life out in as a woman with a penis.  My heart felt Dawn's transformation and love for Prince Christian.  I would encourage you to think about continuing Dawn's story.  Develop her love of children by being around children of the women she friends.  Develop the relationship with Prince Christian's sister and their agreement to let her carry their child.  Develop Dawn's complete transformation as she then bonds with their new son and heir.

Silvia, thank you for your kind words.  I have been unable to write for a little while but I will be able to start again.  It is your kind words that keep me going.  Thank you again.

Hi Lesley.
You wrote a sweet and lovely story. I really loved your story.
Please, don't stop writing stories like this, you are one of the best writers that I read.
Hugs and kisses.
Silvia.

while I did like the story, I do have 1 complaint. That is that the Queen overdid her punishment, and used it to her own ends, and nothing came of it. She got away with, essentially, destroying Eric so that Christian could be happy.

It wasn't Dawn she was thinking of, it was only Christian and herself. It seems that Dawn's happiness was much, MUCH farther down the list. If there is a continuation, I hope that the Queen gets some retribution, or at least that there is some darkness in Christian and Dawn's marriage. Something just to show the Queen that meddling in the lives of others has serious repercussions.

I liked this story.  I am also surprised at the lack of comments.

My only criticism (though it's not a complaint) is that it is rather brief.  Your story remains very focussed on the main characters.  Could you perhaps include some more mundane details of everyday life in the period? You obviously have an empathy for the period.

One small point.  In medieval times bras had not been invented so our modern convention of sizing breasts would presumably not have been known.  Or am I wrong on this?  Does anyone know how they would have described breasts in those days?

Please do write some more.  And continue with the punishment of Alexander.  I have the feeling he will not acquiesce so easily (or at least I hope this is the case).

Thank you for your kind words.  I have started on a story underlying Alexander's punishment.  I have submitted the first part to Crystal.  Keep your eyes out for when it is posted.

We were very surprised to see no other comments about this wonderful tale.
Both Erica and I hope that there will be more tales like this from your pen. We are both very romantic and found this to be just what we wanted. It was sad that the story finished although it was a happy ending. Please write many more of this genre.