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From Rachel's Husband, To Her Father's Wife
by Emma Kate

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Comment by karen marie harden on 08/31/13
beautiful story it made me cry when he propose to you....  love to find a man like that for myself

Comment by diana on 08/15/13
lovely crafted story thank you

Comment by Anne Ward on 09/22/09
I love your stories - I can so relate to the thoughts and experiences of your heroines that I almost feel I know you. I do hope your own life has been as fulfilling as theirs!

Love, Anne.x


Comment by ALISON MARY on 08/13/09
 Just loved your story----it made me feel sooooo good !God bless you
and keep you.Alison

Comment by spacecase sweety on 01/25/08
lovely story,
it makes me want to follow my dreams more than ever.

Comment by (AJ) Eric on 01/19/08
Interesting story -- rather nice.  Some of the dialogue seemed a little stilted to me -- having to handle nearly all the exposition via conversation can cause that -- but it wasn't a major problem.

Eric


Comment by Naah on 01/18/08
Every cliche in the book.

Comment by chris2 on 01/17/08
great story

Comment by Capt Bra on 01/16/08
Wonderful story. Great reading. Would love to see more on this theme.

Comment by Richard Hanson on 01/15/08
This us a very unusal story and very well written and a;most believable.  Keep up the good work



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