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The Front Door
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Comment by Silvia. on 06/15/10
Good story. Comment by Aleesha on 10/04/09 I enjoyed your story but how did Amanda feign her voice? I am lloking forward to reading part 2. Comment by leelee on 10/05/08 Such a cool story and very believable I had a mother who had a suspicioin about my fem side when I was only 8 and she encouraged it to her delight and of course mine too. Mother's can be such wonderful mentors cant' they...Now dad are a tad different I liked your story because it was not seemy or messy it was SWEET thannks Comment by Molly on 07/28/08 Thanks for the SPOILERS, people... :/ At any rate, when Amanda reaches the end of the story, she finds it to be the deep end -- as in, being pitched into the deep end of the pool. Now, it's sink or swim, with an "admirer" along for the ride... Will it be a "date" with destiny? I suppose we'll never know... Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/20/08 THE MOTHER KNEW ALL A LONG Comment by JOHN on 06/12/08 NOW ON TO TALE 2 YUMMY!!!!! Comment by julie j on 02/26/05 its a good story amazing how mothers always seem to know well done &well writeen Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 10/05/04 Amanda, I liked this story. I guess it only goes to show, you can't fool mom, not even for a moment. Giggle. Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 06/23/04 Dear Amanda: Comment by prettysheri on 12/08/01 I want to find this neighborhood. |
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