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Further
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Danielle L. Richards on 02/19/07
Jennifer:
 My God Jennifer I can understand getting revenge on someone who has wronged you but you want it all. Once again you have portrayed women as a vile evil 'do as I say not as I do' gender. I feel that if a women does the crime she should be willing to do the time. What your character did to an innocent is so beneath even you. So tell me do you really hate women that much that you feel you must place them in such a bad light? I would really like to know. I have included my e-mail so that if you CAN explain this I would certainly like to listen. or read as the case may be.

I hope you read these!

                             Dani














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