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The Fury Saga
by Darkside

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Comment by Jim Karner on 01/26/16
  Read in short instalments over a period it is still difficult to remember who is in whose body, perhaps each book should begin with a chart to bring the reader up to date with character changes. Good story but needs more editing.

Comment by Jim Karner on 01/19/16
  Book 1 - 3. Too much concentration needed to keep track of who is in whose body. Further confusion introduced by some chapters repeating a previous chapter in a different perspective as seen by another character. The storyline is good but would be more acceptable if written in a simpler, shorter format.

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Comment by chloe on 05/05/09
a whale of a tail,which isn't bad it just means bring refreshments as it'll take a while to get throu I was't to excited at first I thought it was a bit of over reaction to the situation but it goes with the rest of the story, doesn't take long to get hooked to the end it's super.

Comment by Jo-Anne on 08/16/08
I'd love to leave a nice comment about this epic tale. It's humongous. Awesome, remarkable, intricate. Too much so, I couldn't finish it. In fact it got so complex and fantastic that after Elizabeth slithered away with her tail betwe... um oops ( heh )

I'm to much of a romantic at heart to read it through, it was becoming to dark, to heavy. Blow after blow. Nearly at a glimmer of a break, the rug gets swiped from below your feet again. God how exhausting.

And all that without much of a chuckle or a giggle to loosen the suspense. It's suffocating in a way that reminds me of Russian writers. Which in a way maybe could be considered as praise?

Sorry, I didn't particularly enjoy it.

Jo-Anne


Comment by LJ on 03/21/06
OUTSTANDING!  What else can be said.  Just reread it for the third time, and was actually sorry to see this opus come to an end.  Truly engaging work here.  Hope to see much more.
LJ

Comment by jo on 04/09/05
i finished reading your saga, an its on of the best writing on this site, i wish there was more.  i congratulate you on a well written saga and also on the other stories...  if you ever get a chance to write again i hope it with the same passion that i seen in this saga story.                     thank

Comment by Tarin Summers on 05/11/02
This herculean monster of a story has been a pleasure to read, completely well thought out and throughly entertaining. I thank 'Darkside' for taking what must have been an extremely lengthy and persistant amount of time and effort to craft such an intricate story. To the author I give my complements and a one fingered salute. ^v^

Comment by dave dwyer on 01/30/02
I just started your saga, I like the premise and the character development so far. I am looking forward to finishing it someday soon. Thanks for putting it on the net

Comment by Annie on 02/22/01
This novel length story is about the best I've ever see online let alone for free!

Darkside, if you are not already published in the big hard world of publishers and profits, then you should be! The story of Dr Elizabeth Bexley and her dark & lighter sides is brilliant stuff. I've been reading SciFi since I was 13 and Darkside's up there with the best of them. Greg Bear watch out!

So, what are you waiting for???? Start downloading 'The Fury Directive' now!!!


Comment by Cathy_t_ on 02/09/01
I hardly know where to begin this.  When I originally saw the size of these story chapters, I quailled but I perservered and I am so glad I did.  Darkside took a story that was full of transformations and evil and turned it into a rare work of art.  It didn't go anywhere near where I thought it might and I feel richer and somehow more at peace having read it. There is heroism, sacrifice, adventure, romance, revenge and love in every chapter of this remarkable story and I STRONGLY urge everyone to set aside some time, and READ this masterwork by one of the most talented writers in this, or any other genre.  Darkside, THANK you for this one.  All of your hard work has paid off and this story moved me as no other has done for a long time.  If you have not published before this, you should, IMHO, consider it.  
                       Cathy_t_ said that, and MEANT IT!

Comment by Mr Man on 01/30/01
I've read and enjoyed every story that Darkside has ever posted. Darkside's writing is of a quality all its own, surpassing most published authors. Please do not let the length of the stories deter you from reading them, as they are original, fast moving, and completely riveting. In fact, there is nothing on the net, or in the bookstores for that matter, like them. So please take my recomendations to heart Storysite readers. Darkside is one of the best there is. Now get to reading...



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