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The Games
by Sarah Bayen

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Comment by whyguys on 08/28/13
Sarah... what a delightful vision.  Oh, if in a 100 or so years you would be cited as our era's Nostradamus.  But I do believe the rumor that it really was probably his Female Master who gave him any of his ideas.

Comment by Anja on 07/09/12
Oh thank you so much for opening more space to cnmemot! Well, I would most like to have a pillow fight with my best friend. We used to live in the same hounse now there are a couple thousand kilometers between us, so I would choose her to pillow fight with. By the way I can't wait to see your new line!!! I love city weekend.

Comment by Silvia. on 06/17/12
Pippa K told everything you are sick!

Comment by Peggy on 01/29/05
Great story. Hopefully present trends will continue and we will see a society where women are in charge. With some genetic engineering the world as you describe would come to pass.A story telling how this happened would be interesting. Love your imagination

Comment by jami on 08/10/04
You bring up an interesting point. Do you suppose if men were pampered (nails, hair, etc) and wore soft silky lingerie, pretty dresses, nylons, etc. and women wore the pants, that there would be more female cds and fewere male cds? Would the numbers be reversed? I think its an interesting question to ponder.

Comment by jasmine on 08/09/04
This is a horror story. State sponsored rape. Wonder how many of the victims go catatonic or kill themselves after the games. There must be some.
i did like the story and would like this to continue as the end was great.

Comment by Annabel on 08/09/04
Brilliant and original and beautifully written.
Thank you Sarah.
Hugs, Annabel

Comment by jami on 08/09/04
You have a fertile imagination. Keep it up!

Comment by Pippa K. on 08/08/04
Sarah, you are a sick, sick girl!  Please don't ever change.  I really enjoy your stories, and this one was no exception.  It's that little touch of sentimental irony that makes my day.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 08/08/04
Mad but fun



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