This story was a wonderful and engaging adventure! I enjoyed every minute I spent reading it. With a chilling storyline, a truely evil antagonist, whose favorite pastime seems to be destroying the fabric of the world around her without pity or remorse, and an unfortunate hero who is forced to see his world fall apart right before his eyes this story is one of the most well written and interesting stories I have read in a while. I hope to see more wonderful stories in the future!

an interesting story very weird but well written

Wonderful
I just finished reading this and see potential for a little epilogue
Did brad ever speak to britney again..
Or maybe he located the girl who remembers her previous life

Wow, Brandi.  You are a tremendous writer with a talent for vivid descriptions and slow, psychological changes.  It's amazing.  I look forward to reading more of your work!  Don't keep us waiting. :D

Lot's of changes in this one - I wonder if she'll change Brad too :)

Can't wait for part 4.

Great story, I love how the changes are taking place slowly and how the changees are unaware.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  Thanks for taking the time and sharing this story with us.

:)
Megan.

hope part 2 will be as good as part one

Excellent, I particularly like the way the characters seem largely unaware of their changing habits and yet the main character still has a nagging feeling that things aren't quite how they should be.
A tantalising first part, I look forward to the second.

Good stuff. Keep it coming.

I LIIIKE IT!!!!  

Really good Brandi....Please do continue.  You have lotsa fans waiting.

Hey Brandi,

I see you are planning to continue this story. IMHO, it could be left as it is. It is quite interesting in its own way. Leaving things hanging at the end is a VERY powerful artistic device. This forces the reader to use imagination to complete the thought.

Now I am left wondering whether only Brad's friends will turn into girls or if he too will be feminized.

Interesting.

sincerely,

HER

Not a bad start, I look forward to the next installment.

Okay, I'm an idiot.  This story is not complete, and I have submitted the second part recently (hopefully correctly) so soon it should be available.  Thanks for all the feed back so far!

Brandi

Hopefully the "complete" listed for this story is a mistake.  Please continue, as this is shaping up as a good horror story.

Please continue this story !!! It's been really interesting, and not the typical story on here. I'd love to see the one of the "guys" get into hamtaro, and a huge fight over who is better, Christina, Britney, or Avril. Perhaps they'll be more into gymnastics or female soccer or cheerleading?

Dementia

Interesting story. The ending wasn't totally clear the way it was written.