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Gappu
by Shefali

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Comment by RoyalCBD on 11/18/20
VyrtKy Some in truth exciting points you have written.Assisted me a lot, just what I was looking on behalf of.

Comment by best pron on 10/25/19
uDVPtH Thank you ever so for you article post.Really thank you! Want more.

Comment by jeremy abrams on 05/15/17
f2Z8Zj I truly appreciate this article post.Much thanks again.

Comment by crorkz matz on 08/03/14
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Comment by seo service on 09/08/13
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Comment by harish on 11/14/10
hi shefali im a an indian and i like ur stories and plz write more stories.
hi is anyone there to talk to a indian Crossdresser plz PM me
 my ID is sissy.boy56@yahoo.com

Comment by Vin2Vineetha on 07/19/10
Hi Shefali,

I really liked your story and its any CD's dream if it really happens. I would love to read more from you. Please post more stories of such kind.

Vineetha


Comment by Vinay Kumar on 06/24/10
Nice story to read and it refreshed my mind with one of my past experience of wearing a saree and transforming myself as a woman, which was first forced by a woman on me and later very much accepted by me in her presence making it a pleasant event for both of us.

Comment by shailaja on 10/21/09
nice story shefali, plz upload more stories.

Comment by Ajay on 08/25/09
Beautiful story.i like to read such stories.plz update ur page now and then

Comment by Artemis on 08/14/09
Remember that many of your readers don't speak Hindi, and accordingly they'd find it very helpful if you'd add a list of the clothing items you describe, explaining what they look like and how they are used.

Comment by KESHAV on 06/19/06
HI SHEFALI
YOU ARE REALLY GOOD WRITER AND YOU TRULY REPRESENTS INDIA ON THIS SITE WITH STORIES WITH INDIAN MILIEU.WHAT HAPPENED YOU HAVE NOT PASTED A NEW STORY SINCE LONG. I REALLY LIKE THE WAY YOU WRITE STORIES BUT I WISH YOU WRITE SOME STORIES FROM STORY SITE WITH AN INDIAN FLAVOUR LIKE THE BRIDE OF BOWMANOR. YOU WRITE THIS STORY WITH INDIAN TASTE AND EVENTS HAPPENING IN NAWABS OR ZAMINDAR FAMILY.
AONTHER STORIES THAT I WOULD LIKE YOU TO WRITE WITH BACKGROUND OF INDIAN SOCIETY ARE 'HYPNOTIZED TO WEAR DRESSES' AND 'THREE YEAR ITCH'
WITH BEST WISHES

Comment by Josephine Gonsalves on 06/09/06
I liked the story line.
And the woman becoming the husband to a CD, is a CD's ultimate fantasy.
Josie

Comment by Beardy on 03/28/06
Nice story.
The writing style really gives a sense of naivety to the main character.
I don’t know if that is intentional, or because English isn’t really your first language.
The one problem I have is that the occasional “he” occurs, losing the first-person feel.
This is a mistake that I would not make if I were really telling a story about myself.

Comment by Kristina Ward on 03/27/06
Wonderful story.

Comment by Elizabeth on 03/25/06
This Author should be commended for such a fine effort.  Yes, you can tell that English is not her native tongue and yes the phrasing did show that influance.   I speak Texan myself so I understand the difficulties of the English language.  

The story is very well written and flows very smoothly.  It is very much worth the read.  

Congradulations, well done!

Comment by vijay on 03/25/06
nice story shefali , i would like if you write some more stories like this



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