Listen to Stewart's comments about character development.

Also, a gauntlet is a glove.  Don't you mean gantlet ?

Hun, sweet and sentimental really doesn't suit this. Please change it. As Jezzi Belle Stewart said, he was raped and his reaction  felt...well...forced.

nice job. a little different than most; that's what i liked about it. could have obviously been fleshed out more, but that doesn't seem to be what you were going for...i would have liked more resistance on his part - not violent, but inquisitive. overall, a good story that easily lends itself to more.

A very good story that makes you want to be Joe/Jolene.

Lots of grammatical errors - I sense English is not your native language?  I liked the story right up to the sex room.  I got the strong impression that Joe was a nice average guy going along with the girls because he was a good sport and for the story.  Then he's confronted by a man and a bed. This is a major major escalation, as up till that point it's all been something he could take as good fun, like a Halloween disguise.  Then choice is taken away from him as the man forcibly kisses him.  He blacks out and awakens to find that he has been, in effect, raped - either the man raped an unconscious girl or there was some other consciousness animating Joe's body.  And all the reaction to this is "OK, I'm a girl."?  There is no background for Joe being gay, or that his orientation had changed during the first part of the trip.  I would have expected outrage, first at being forcibly kissed, then at being raped, certainly not bland acceptance; for that his mind would have had to be manipulated, and the girls didn't seem that nasty.  I think it would have been more believable if in the last room there had been a man and a woman with the option to pick either one or just exit having sex with neither.