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Gemma
by Chloe D

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Comment by Pixie on 10/29/11
Hi Chloe,
 Good story, but too fast, girlfriend, mother and doctor, all appeared to have the, oh well, there you go attitude.
  For a boy who apparently had no inclination to even want to become a girl, no drugs
or magic potions being involved, he suddenly changed from being panic stricken to
being totally in love with the situation.
  Oh well never mind dear, "BOY" today, "GIRL" tomorrow!  
  Kind regards,
     Pixie.  xx

Comment by Silvia. on 07/17/11
Good story.

Comment by Peggy Sue on 06/03/08
Would that it were so simple!

Comment by Jane Hudson on 11/28/04
I wish that was me

Comment by maggiethekitten on 11/25/04
Huggles Chloe

Thanks for you wonderful story I really enjoyed it.  It went so fast, but from boy to girl in less than a week IS FAST!   Still in that week you managed to capture a great deal of the transformation and you gave it to us with great emotion from fear to happy anticipation of him now her life to come.  I felt I was going hi speed change right there along with Andrew.

I hope to read more and thanks for sharing, Maggie



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