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Gentle Touch
by Peter Joseph

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Comment by Corina on 07/09/12
I work for Herts Mind Network and am looking to get a group toeeghtr, including staff and service users to come and see the show. This is something that has created a lot of interest and was hoping that we could arrange a discount depending on numbers.It would be great if we could and look forward to hearing from you soon. Kind Regards
Comment by Silvia. on 04/09/10
Bad story!
Silvia.
Comment by Aleesha on 01/08/10
Quite a different story, very well written but I would have prefered to read a conclusion or a part 2. How could Pete have become a model at 34? I enjoyed this story though. Thanks.
Comment by jezzi Stewart on 05/20/04
after part 2

So none of them ever really liked pete, their friendliness was all an act?  They were really just setting him up to be a porno product?
Comment by Sheryl S. on 01/09/04
Dear Pete (Pietra?):

Simply marvelous, m'dear!  I truly enjoyed it.  You told it lovingly, took your time with it, and made us all feel really good.  If I smoked, I'd light up now!

Love & Huggs,
Sheryl S.
Comment by Andrew on 01/09/04
I have not read your story yet, so this comment is only about the categories you chose.  Altered Fates is a universe created by Jenny North involving the Medallion of Zulo.  If you do not use this plot device, the story cannot use "Altered Fates" as a category./
Comment by Paula on 01/09/04
a sweet story which would make a good part 2 to continue if you ever decide to write more about the modeling career.


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