dNUICm Skill without imagination is craftsmanship and gives us many useful objects such as wickerwork picnic baskets. Imagination without skill gives us modern art.

Dear Miss Amber-Jane,

I just, "had," to re-read your Pretty Story. It's still a fun story. No one is forcing anyone to do anything.

I didn't, "tell," you before, that I just, "love," your name. Amber jane is a pretty name.

I hope you are well. Are you working on another story?

Sisterly yours,
"Missy," Susan Pauline

Dear Ms. AmberJane,

What a beautiful short story. You introduced all the members of your story quite well. The, "word-pictures" you created for these girls, let me know how they looked.

While reading your story, I could almost sense and feel the effects of, "Gins's," cross-dressing experience. You, actually, "drew me into," your story. I could almost feel those girls changing and dressing me.

Myself, I'm my Mistress/Wife's Housemaid/husband. It's so nice to read about a lad/lady being able to enjoy dressing as a girl rather than being, "forced," into doing so. It's nice, too, to read a story, that is not over-laced with sexual conduct.

I do hope you will write again. It's been a while since you wrote this story.

I'd, love," to read about Gina's next year at school.

"Missy," Susan

Great story! I very much agree with the others that it was well written. I hope you will write some more in the same vein. I, too, wish I could have been in Georges' shoes.

Love,

LYNNETH

Good story, well written and very believeable too:-)

Great story!
Very, very good story you wrote.
Why you stopped writing? You're good at it!
Kisses.
Silvia.

very well done, i cant stop smiling

great story. keep them coming , maybe a follow up? mmmmmmmm

great story. Wish it had happened to me!!!

a great bunch of girls to live with if only i had georges chance well written and a good story canot wait untill the next part

i thought the story was lovely,do continue with your writing,you seem to have your finger on the pulse.

Hi Ambaerjane. I just read this story today and I found it very nice. I like this type of TG fiction. No forced feminization and no anger involved in revenge. This is the way a TG fiction piece should be written. I hope you write another one just like it.

Barb

Congrats on a very nice sweet story.  It was a very pleasant change to find no bondage or kinky sex stuff; from the title, I half-way expected George to wake up from a a drug induced sleep already half feminized and tied to the bed.  (I know, I know, I read it anyway. :-)  My only criticism would be that your grammar really needs work; the changing from first person to third and the incorrect pronoun usage from time to time were confusing.

No comments?  I'm proud to be the 1st to offer congrats!  Loved the story; it ran at a nice pace and was just what a 'g' rating should be.  I'm sure there'll be plenty that would have liked you to pad the time at the club with lots of groping with the guys or a romp back at the flat with the girls, but I thought it 'nice' as it was, the girls taking over and gently leading him to do their bidding.

Here's to the next one.

TinaCortina