Good story Janet, I wish I could have had such understanding parents, I do hope that your parents helped you positively as you emerged.

I have to admit that John has a point. But on the whole a good story Janet. Too bad Diane can't be a boy as well as a girl for the girlfriend. Janet, update this story and give her the transition to womanhood she needs. Personally, i think if you were caught, you would be one foxy girl.

Cute story.
One *SMALL* problem, though--the main character's ("Diane Grant") MALE Name *CHANGES* during the story--First, the character "Gail" asks "Is Greg home?", and it has already been implied that "Diane" has only *ONE* sibling, his/her brother "Jeff".
Later, the character Jennifer Logan says to "Diane": "I know a David Grant. Are you related?" to which "Diane" replies: "I am David, or I used to be...."
Now, unless there's *ANOTHER* child in the Grant family who wasn't mentioned, then "Diane Grant", "Greg Grant", and "David Grant" are all the same person. I suppose it's possible that "Diane's" real name is "David Gregory Grant" or "Gregory David Grant", and he answered readily to "David" or "Greg" before making the decision to live as a female, but it *WOULD* be nice if Ms. Stickney could clear up that little discrepancy in the event that she decides to publish an updated version of this story.
No criticism intended. I *MEAN* that. It's just that little flaws like that tend to detract from the realism of an otherwise enjoyable story, especially if you're as detail-oriented as I am. I was a professional proofreader from March 1988 until August 2000 (as well as an *AMATEUR* proofreader for years prior to becoming employed as one), so I tend to notice little errors like that. :)

Wow, I thought, 3/4 through, a Janet story where the guy/girl stays a shemale and ends up with a girl.  Alas for the last quarter.  I do like your stories Janet, and read each one, but just once.....