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Ghostwriter
by Jennifer White

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Comment by this is me on 07/29/12
What I don't understand is all the reviewers are talking about what bianca did as if she were such a main culprit. We don't even know if she was successful. After having read the rest of the story that doctor is a quack but the circumstances also conspired to change ryan.

Comment by this is me on 07/29/12
It seemed funny to me and then I became disgusted with myself. If it were a girl setting him up I would have been fuming mad. I, however, realized the kid was fighting back the only way he could.

As for that doctor stone his half-assed logic has a familiarity. It is part and parcel to a majority of the stories in this gendre.


Comment by Rone Welles on 10/31/06
  Off the deep end that is where this goes ... well done crazy story
worth the time to read and the story will make you think ...

crazy but nice wrting keep up the good work ....XO Rone


Comment by Ginger on 11/22/04
This was a cute story that was fun to read.  It has humor and style.  Thank you.

Comment by Early June on 11/17/04
 An unfortunate set of choices. Yet, Tammy seems happier now than before. Maybe it was just dumb luck. Dumb.  And lucky.  Lucky that Tammy didn't commit suicide.  And now?  Now, we have another person to be persecuted by the pstupid pyschiatrist. Appaprently the dumb doctor is still suffering from LSD after effects.
 Altogether a fun read. I enjoyed your manipulation of his "Male" response to a "female" characteristic.  Very entertaining. Thank you Jennifer.  Kudos from a frantic fan to a favorite fiction former.

Comment by James Dewald on 11/16/04
I think this story was funny as hell how could you not love it.

Comment by Jashperous Jim on 11/15/04
This has to be the stupidest family ever. No one acts like this, and no one would do this to their kids. I couldn't buy into the premise of this story at all.

Comment by Jill Micayla on 11/15/04
I liked your story, it just shows waht goes around comes around. Biamca is no dummy, she saw what was taking place and played her brother Josh to the hilt. Josh knew his jig was up.



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