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A Gifted Child
by Donna Spencer

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Comment by Sharon on 09/24/10
What a beautiful story,mothers always know when their boys want to be girls and they are always willing to help.

Comment by julie larue on 11/05/03
very intersting way to put your story together, i like it.  im hoping you continue the story about the the trip to the mall and maybe christine accidently lets it slip to karen and she ewants to help donnie, maybe even later they get to be real boy/girl n girl friends.

hugs julie larue

Ps: if you e-mail me be sure to use 'sissy stories' in the title

Comment by Happy Reader on 03/26/03
Your have developed a great story line with good intrigue.  The way mom handled the situation is an example for all parents.  And, the possibility for him to develop a relationship with his cousin plus the possiblity of one with his "girl friend" causes anticipation.  You are a writer fulfilling the readers' dreams when he/they were that young.  Do continue and thank you.

Comment by Barbara Lynn on 11/21/02
What a story! But, it isn't finished. Please continue on with the shopping trip to the mall. I want to see what they buy her.

Barb

Comment by Charllott on 04/16/02
I agree to all of the above comments and I hope you continue the story.  I'm intrested to find out what they purchase for her at the mall. Caprice has a good point about the slip. Now she needs a bra and a larger wardrobe.

Comment by A Reader & Closit Dresser on 02/10/02
This story is cute & loveable. Please continue.

Comment by jill koch on 10/29/01
I love your story. but are you go put part three out for me to read.

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 10/04/01
Congratulations, Donna!  Part two is like icing on the cake.  I like Christie, and I hope she and Donnie have some adventures.  Maybe the next story should be first person Grace or Robin, or maybe go back and forth among the four in the same, longer, story.  I would like to see a salon visit story told that way, maybe bringing in the beautician as well, also maybe a male point of view (Robin's husband?)  Maybe a story where Donnie (femme name?) gets a job playing the paiano at a dept. store and a salon visits and clothing discounts are perks.  All kinds of possibilities.  

Comment by caprice bellefleur on 10/03/01
I love the idea of retelling the events from the different characters' points of view--sort like of "Rashomon." One slight quibble: The dress is originally described as not needing a slip, but after Donnie takes it off he's wearing one.

I look forward to the trip to the mall.

Comment by emmie dee on 09/28/01
On a discouraging day, I found this story uplifting and encouraging. I hope that we hear more from Donna!

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 09/27/01
  very nice story.  I think one of the attractions was the dark potential looming in the background.  Everytime Grace or Donnie DIDN'T say anything because they were unsure of the reaction of the other, there was the dark spiral road of shame. disgust, depression, eventual suicide beckoning.  But it didn't happen.  The good is always so much sweeter contrasted against the possibility of evil.

Comment by Catherine Hanes on 09/25/01
This was a great little story, and very familiar. I tried to tell my mother about my crossdressing in a similar way. The results weren't nearly as positive. If I think about this delightful story instead of the real events, I think things will SEEM better in my memory

Comment by Traci KLawes on 09/25/01
Cute!  Oh my gosh, a sweet story, and still somwhat believable!  We all wish our families  were that understanding & supportive.
Good work!

Comment by Julia Manchester on 09/25/01
This is a wonderful beginning to what may prove to be a great serial.  Donna's style is low key, sensitive, and extremely literate. Her prose flows smoothly and is a joy to read.  I am looking forward to further installments of this excellent story.  

Comment by Credence Browne on 09/24/01
Very nice story. Don't we all wish that our first exposure to our parents had been that way.

It was a bit choppy at times. Don't be afraid to describe how things are more.

Blessings

Credence

Comment by Alyssa Davis on 09/24/01
I agree with Amanda...very nice.  Refreshing, for a change.
Let's see more.

Comment by Nellie D on 09/24/01
A nice sweet story of a boy who wears girls clothing and agonizes over how his mother will react. Donna did a good job of writing with no misspelling or grammar flaws.

Comment by Amanda Walker on 09/24/01
Nice. Just very sweet and nice. Keep writing!



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