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Gifts For Her
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Comment by Sonia on 06/15/13
Hi Jennifer, Your imagination and stories are mostly excellent. Comment by Silvia. on 02/26/09 You write things that real women can't understand. Comment by Elizabeth Rees on 09/06/05 This was a good story - right up to the end, which finished on a common Jennifer White sour note. Comment by Early June on 08/21/05 I like. I like. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 08/10/05 << "I'll drink to that!" >> Comment by Brenna on 08/08/05 Great story, and I also love seeing men feminized by women in the workplace. I have this thought you could do a killer piece about the slow femming of a downsized exec, who's always looked down on his wife's successful beauty parlor, how he winds up helping, being gradually femmed put into a skirted uniform to do shampoos, reporting to the other beauticians and finally, realizing he enjoys beauty parlor gossip and dressing, willfully abandoning any chance of going back to a white collar job to take training as a beautician, and to have surgery without losing his wife. Comment by Eileen on 08/07/05 Ditto Andrea's comments here as well. Comment by Andrea Foster on 08/06/05 I really enjoyed this story. I liked the "working woman" background, and especially that the hero(ine) was actually a *more* successful salesperson, and not turned into a bimbo or something equally stereotyped. The whole thing was sufficiently realistic to allow very easy suspension of disbelief too. |
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