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Girl Camp
by Jennifer White

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Comment by yuri fan on 03/02/13
Bashing boys and then the breakup was too much for me  

If the goal was to get Taylor to look bad then it worked.


Comment by Korie on 12/19/10
Sorry, but your feminism and seeming hatred for men bothers me. And yout dipiction of the way men  act around eachother is WAY off. We don't show off how strong we are. We just hang out and chill. I only know one guy who ever cheated on his girlfriend and he came clean and felt terrible. Were you like, raped or cheated or beat by a man? Why the hatred?

Comment by Tommy on 10/11/09
I like it. I hope you have more.

Comment by Silvia. on 02/26/09
I am really sorry, but I don't think this as a good story.
Silvia.

Comment by Rone welles on 10/30/06
Good story and it showed what strong love can do to a boy ..
true love, he will do anything to be with the girl he loves...

keep up the good writing and thank you for a G rated story that was super I realy loved the story ...

XO  Rone


Comment by Sam on 05/19/06
I just would like to have the scene written where Amy goes to the other girls and talks with them.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 09/02/05
If Taylor loved Aaron at the start of camp, why didn't she protest when Amy told her her plan for "Erin" and the reasons* for it?  Why would she go along with his true feminization?  Since Amy read Aaron immediately and started the ball(s) rolling right away, she would have talked to Taylor before she gradually came to see Aaron as a girl.  You didn't give any indication that their love for each other wasn't real, so there was nothing to indicate that this was a set up by Taylor from the beginning.  Her acceptance of Amy's plan doesn't make sense.  

Also, if Amy could read Aaron, she should also have been able to "read" his and taylor's love for each other.  Her reason for feminizing him seems but an excuse for her being able to vent her hatred of males by feminizing one.


Comment by nicola park on 08/28/05
I really enjoyed this story it was really cute and pleasing too read thank you for writing it *HUGZ*nikki



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