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GIRL Center - A Leap of Faith
by Karen Elizabeth L.

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Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 02/23/14
    Ten full years since I first commented on GIRL Center- A Leap of Faith and I still love this story.   This tale is truly a joy and delight.  I wish you would write more stories.  There is enough sorrow in the world so the joy you translate in palpable form in your stories is very much appreciated.  Thank you Karen.

    Hugs, Kristi


Comment by Jamie Erickson on 12/19/10
You tell a great story!  This is one of my favorites and will remember your story lines forever.  A shame that this is not availible in novel form.  

Comment by Alison Mary on 08/09/09
 Karen Elizabeth,I had my doubts about this story and left it till
last,but the more I read the more I liked it and could not leave it alone .Like other readers I think you need someone to proof read and
edit it but you really are some writer.Thank you again and God bless.
ALISON

Comment by Silvia      (from Brazil) on 05/25/09
Yeah, one more time you give to us this lovely and amazing tale of you. I loved all the story.
Thankyou so much. You're so sweet.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Doris Drummond on 02/22/08
   Fantastic story, I did not want it to end, there were so many young ladies involved. I have never seen so many clichés and particularly superlatives in any story, they were in virtually ever paragraph; wonderful!
   A pity about the many grammatical and some spelling errors though, but there has never been any story without them.
   It would appear, though I am sure it is not true, to have been written by an incredibly frustrated and unfulfilled TS.

Comment by Vivien Tena' on 12/12/06
Very good story!  You tell the story well enough to make a person feel as though they are in the story itself.  it's a feel good story and I will also save it for a later time to read again!  Keep writing Karen, you write very well!


                 Vvien


Comment by Donna Dee on 02/28/04
 Two years was a long time to keep us waiting Karen, and in general terms the wait was well worth it, though two previous commenters have said it needed a good edit to eliminate the typos - something none of your stories have needed before.  I still think Christy was your best however.

Comment by Another Brian on 01/06/04
Dear Karen:
    Thanks for a great story. Your library of work has always held my interest. I have found your writing to be worthy of a second, third and in some cases multiple reads. I will certainly add GIRL Centre to that list. Thanks for the enthusiasm you bring to your work. Sometimes it causes you to move ahead a little too quickly but the obvious joy of your story gives you the literary licence to do it.
 Thanks again! Another Brian

Comment by Sissy Baby Paula on 01/06/04
Lovely, lovely story! I have always loved Your stories for their happines! Perhaps the turn from a bad boy to good girl was a bit fast but heck who cares? I just loved the romance side of things! Please more these stories!

Hugs from Sissy Baby Paula and Snowball (my toy puppy)

Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 01/05/04
Dear Karen:

   This has got to be your best yet.  Excellent story telling, especially transmitting the enthusiasm of Holly, Faith, and Tiffany.  Loved how it was so fun to be a girl.  Problems with misspellings and other editorial necessities were a little distracting.  I had some problems with everyone being so open about what goes on at GIRL school. All the same I loved and enjoyed this story as it is a nice long juicy one.  A very fun, engaging, and emotionally uplifting work. Thank you so much for sharing.

Hugs,

Kristi  

Comment by Angel O'Hare on 01/03/04
Read it right through in one sitting! Wonderfuly done until I reached the honeymoon and adoption part. Giggle, giggle.

All the way through it was clean and neat. Wonderful interactions and characters! Just wondering why you ended it the way you did?

Huggles
Angel

Comment by Jane Hudson on 01/03/04
Just read all four parts all I can say is wow just loved it wish I was sent to a school like that .If only it was real a lot of kids like I was would have found there way their true way more please



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