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Girl for a Spell
by Ellie Dauber

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Comment by Unknown 512 on 12/16/13
Extremely well written with very few noticeable grammatical errors(as I make many myself ignore that). Wish this was continued, as many options was available to continue it. As i wish I could continue this story, I most definitely could not continue the nice theme you have created.

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Comment by prakhar on 05/16/11
really the story was very good please keep writing such stories

Comment by Colin on 08/12/10
Eliie I love all your books, so funny!!!!
I think you picked the perfect ending, funny, and she [he] found her [his] purpse, keep writing more of the same type and all read all of them!!!!!!!!

Comment by gj on 06/15/10
nice storie took three vist too finish,but i kept coming back.The ending was slightly defferent then i expected,although kind of obvious.The body well kind of simluar too what i sen or read before,but still keptinterest.to bad i couldn't get a chance like that.just being able too use real magic whould be enough for me...lol

Comment by Moly on 06/01/10
CCSh1b My name is Moly, i am a funny girl. This post is fake, hahaha.

Comment by Jackie on 03/01/10
I loved the story, and I thought it was well written, and had a good story line. Just wish it could happen to me, LOL. Keep up the good work, I look forward to more of your stories.

Comment by Dave on 11/25/07
i think that Alan doesn't try to resist the spell that much. Do you thibk you can make an alternate story

Comment by Will It Work on 07/01/05
This was a well-presented and well-written story.  It's not smut, and is quite romantic, in an attractive way.  It would be more of an intro TG story, as I feel that the TG aspects play a second role to the inter-character dynamics.

Much happies.

Comment by julie on 02/27/03
an excellent story what I have read so far I need to read fully whewn I have more time then i will make further comment a good start so far

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 07/30/02
I liked this story. Alan/Alice was given a choice at the end and chose her new life.  I liked his reasoning for making the choice she did.  (Although I would have thought he would have been distrustful of his Aunt's assurances that she had no part in his waking up still Alice and her explanation that love was not part of her spell.)  No identity death here, She got to be Alice and keep Alan.  


Comment by Sissy Priscilla Valentine on 03/04/02
Beautiful story, LOVED the romance.  Eloquently written, even the magic was beleivable.  Nice job, honey!

Kisses!!

Sissy Prissy

Comment by Lisa Wange on 05/18/01
Loved your story
Makes me want to be Alan



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