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The Girl Friend
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Comment by lee lee on 09/17/08
I loved this love story if we all could be so lucky thanks it was a well written piece of work Comment by WannabeGinger on 07/22/08
Comment by Molly on 04/23/08 In this story, Tina demonstrates her understanding of human nature. Women who choose crossdressers appreciate a gentle and sensitive nature that is not macho, want someone who embraces female values and understands female priorities, and really like the idea of having a boyfriend and a girlfriend rolled up together in the same person. Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 10/15/07 TINA, I TOO AM A STAR TREK FAN. THANK YOU FOR NOT ONLY A BIT OF COMEDY AND ACCEPTANCE BUT ALSO A NEW LOOK AT AN OLD SERIES. EVER THOUGHT ABOUT DOING A STAR TREK STORY? THAT'S RIGHT, IT HAS BEEN DONE WHERE KIRK SWITCHED BODIES WITH JANICE LESTER. BUT WHAT IF KIRK IN HER BODY GOT PREGNANT? Comment by DEE on 09/26/07 THIS IS THE FIRST OF YOUR STORIES THAT I'VE READ AND I FOUND IT Comment by julie j on 11/18/04 a well written gentle story of a happy loving couple welldone no shock or violence just a nice story Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 08/30/04 Dear Valentina Michelle: Comment by SassySue on 09/19/03 A wonderful, sweet story. Since my experience (and I think most tg's and cd's) is more like Jezzi Stewart's, I found it very hard to believe that a wife could be not only accepting, but so encouraging. Lois' explanation at the end helped me understand how it came about. I hope your actual experiences were as sweet as you (and Stephanie in her comment) depicted. Comment by Sheila on 09/18/03 Valentina ... I think this is one of the most beautiful and important CD stories I've ever read. If done wisely by your readers, I think it would help many CDs to have happy marriages. I agree with nearly everything. But many CDs, including myself, have had wonderful times in bed during lovemaking and cuddling while en femme. So, as a writer myself, I would suggest you might consider revising one graf (I'm not trying to change any views you have; just ask for consideration). The graf: Comment by Sheryl S. on 09/18/03 I must admit that I cried too. Really thought you did an excellent job of developing the characters. Very sweet - perhaps just a tickle overnarrated bacause your characters were speaking eloquently enough by themselves. Keep writing. I loved it. Comment by Stephanie on 09/18/03 I read your story and I just cried. It reminded me and my wife almost to a tee. The only exception was that my wife found my secret cache of clothing while I was out playing golf. She too, surprized me with her acceptance and her willingness to help me become "Stephanie"!In fact, after about 6 weeks, she announced that we would have a "girls'only weekend". She kept telling me to relax but with every mile we drove I just kept getting more nervous. Eventually I did relax and we enjoyed a wonderful weekend together! It was soooooo exciting that we now spend 1 weekend a month as our "girl's only" weekend. We usually go a motel and visit the small towns in the area, shopping the antique stores or arts and crafts markets. These are the things I do not like doing as a male, but enjoy immencely as a woman!Oh well thats enough of me, Keep up the fine writing and I'll be looking forward to your next story. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 09/18/03 I waited till my wife left for work and then cried over this story. For what might have been. My wife hates me, Jezzi. No girlfriend for me. |
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