OWw5qc I wanted to thank you for this good read!! I definitely enjoyed every bit of it. I have you book-marked to look at new things you post

M06q6C Looking forward to reading more. Great post.Thanks Again. Will read on...

JfyCo2 Very neat article.Much thanks again. Awesome.

Ridiculous, horrible, disgusting,sickly,etc...

Hi, loved your story, but as usual the more feminine the male gets, wearing frilly aprons, it seems the less he or anyone wears pretty feminine aprons. I,VE noticed in most storys, if pretty aprons are mentioned, its only because the transvestite is the only one wearing a pretty apron then they fade, why can,t more tvs have frilly aprons be part of there dressing plasure too. And I don,t mean just maids uniforms, especially those stupid french maids uniforms, that are too short, and have a silly tiny apron. As you,ve guessed I love wearing pretty aprons,vintage style, plastic aprons are my favorites, well thanks for a nice story. CINDY

sweet storymore please

What a lovely story , thank you

I enjoyed reading this story very much because it was well written with a good plot and strong character development. I like the tea dresses and the tea party concept. In reading some of the other comments I've become curious if these people read the same story I read.

My take on the relationship between Donna and Sally is that Donna is a superior dominant to Sally who is making the decision about the man Sally will marry and helping to re-shape his personality to the girlfriend with benefits that Sally obviously desires. If Sally did not want her new friend changed in this way, why risk sending him to Donna who has had a pivotal role in the "little darlings."

I really don't know much about TV or crossdressing, but I found the story very erotic and I learned a little more about the TV fetish. I look forward to reading more of your work.

One of the rare stories where the protagonist is crossdressing AND is loved for this kind of manhood. Nice idea -being a girl with benefits. But as in so many stories, the obvious wish to crossdress is described as being a detected, an hidden wish. In reality it is the other way round: the crossdresser knows that he loves to carry his manhood under skirts, and is looking for a woman who is delighted by such an extremely feminine man. Unfortunately this coincidence of wishes is very rare, and therefore we can read such stories, which are fruits of unfullfilled dreams. My whole live I have not found a woman who can stand her husband in a dress. My wife is knowing my crossdressing and is accepting it, but is not willing to share it. So our author should have add to the wonderful first part a story of the further life of the two lovers, but not bringing the protagonist more or less down to a sensitive, but submissive mental slave. I follow with this the sentences of Eric above. By the way, please excuse my rough argumentation as English is not my mother tongue. Anyway, I would be very pleased to read more from this author, his story is an outstanding one on this storysite.

A great, great story.  As a TV my eyes were quite tearful readin git.  Keep up the good work.  X

A nice story. The slow evolution into a loving femininity was so logical and delightful.

Thank you for a wonderful story. It is so different to the usual stories one reads. Love the tea dresses part. More please

fasinating story well written welldone

Fascinating story very well written with a beautiful setup.  The story progresses very logically and yet is romantic at the same time.

Keep writing like this and your readers will keep looking for the dream woman that tolerates and is attracted to us TS/TG people.

If you write a part II, don't forget chastity belts do exist just to foil a close girl friend from sharing.

Thanks again for an engrossing story.

Billie-Jo

Loved this story,keep up the good work

Will gladly echo others in their praise of the first half of this story - or perhaps I should say, the first story. After all, the 2nd half is a second story, quite different and in my mind scarcely implied by or led up to by the first half. I like to think of the first story being given an appropriate ending and the second carefully reworked (Tea gowns are such a nicely erotic subject!), probably with different characters.

No critique, just a gentle 'thank you' for a different approach.  Please continue the development.

Dawn

    First part of the story was deep, sensitive and delicious. Loved the bonding, sharing and communion. Second half was erotic as the first half was, but lacked the depth of the first half. All in all a very good first effort. Thank you and I do recommend this story.

    Kristi

I enjoyed the first half of this story about as much as I was deeply disappointed in the rest of it.  Our protagonist was convinced that he had passed Donna's test and had been judged a suitable partner for Sally.  Then Donna proceeds to brainwash him, apparently concluding that the only safe partner for Sally is one who loses the intellectual and emotional capacity that got the two of them together in the first place.  Donna may think a willing slave-girl with male equipment makes a good companion for Sally, but I can't accept Sally going along with it, or continuing to consider Donna her friend.

Sorry.

Eric