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Girlie Cheer Camp
by KaraLynn

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Comment by oem software on 02/12/12
Koc8kF Can be also this issue because the truth can be achieved only in a dispute :DD

Comment by Silvia. on 04/24/09
Why the girls don't invite him without blackmail?
Blackmail is a bad thing!
Silvia.

Comment by juliej on 07/27/05
a sweet story

Comment by Paula Jutras on 10/27/03
Sure many of us would enjoy having this happen and have their cheerleading dreams come true.

Comment by Annie O on 09/04/03
I just love stories where boy become girls and mix in with them. No sex, no "uh, uh, I'm cumming" crap -- just boys enjoying the girls' company and fitting in. The descriptions were wonderful!
 Well, a little encourage ment is necessary regarding the blackmail angle.
  I do hope you are planning another story similar to this, maybr a sleepover. Or a trip to a mall for more shopping or meeting some of the other cheerleaders?
  A great story!

Comment by Cassandra on 09/02/03
Dear,

This is a truly lovely tale. The best part of it well,
I thought there were two, is the ending where the three new cheerleaders are thrilled about there acceptance as cheerleaders and their plans to continue to share girly experiences together.

The other best part is the night before closing when Michelle receives her first VicSec bra and panties. I remember ever so fondly my first VicSec and how thrilled I was both as to the gift and to the giver (my mom)!

I am going to take slight issue with Jezzi and Pervy's comments about the "additional encouragement" given to Michael. Michael was and had been Michelle for a long time, notwithstanding a three year sabbatical. Erica and Michelle's mom simply wanted Michelle to know they were serious. This just doesn't rise to "blackmail". Besides the story is NOT about Michelle or Lauren or Kristin. This is about camp on which subject you exhibit much knowledge.

I loved the story. I told you that. I'll wait for another of your contributions.

Hugs,

Cassandra

Comment by Pervette on 08/31/03
I agree with Jezzi. The blackmail was unnecessary, especially in
view of how willing Michelle turned out to be. No grumbling, no
protests, just complete cooperation throughout. But a story well
worth keeping in any case, especially if you ever hope to become
a cheerleader & would like a concise handbook on how it's done....
.
--Pervy

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 08/31/03
Given that it was likely that "Michelle" would help the squad, why did they feel the need to add blackmail to what was up to that point a nice sweet request note?  If I had been Michael, with his history, I would have read the note thinking, "Wow, great!  I can go to cheer camp!  How nice of the girls to ask me." but when I came to the blackmail, my thoughts would change.  I would think, "Wow, what bitches, and be more inclined to say, "Hell no, I won't go! And if you bitches do spread that tape, I'll find a way to make YOUR lives a living hell!"  I hate blackmail.



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