I LOVED the story.  I think the  details about dance wear were very enjoyable. I assume that Karalynn  has actually taken dance.  I would  love to chat with her about  that.

Hi Kara,
   I love stories about ballet and ballerina's!
'But'! Where's the story????
As far as I could see, it was just advertising various makes of ballet-ware, and makeup companies, and very little story content!
  I love wearing leotards, tights and tutu's, and was hoping more for the shy little boy approach, reluctant to dress up in 'girl's ballet attire, rather than jump into it with both feet.
Regards. Vicki  

I love this story and I wish that was me. I love ballet stories of little boys dressed up as little girls and ballerinas. My mother dressed me up when I was a little boy for ballet and I danced for five years as a little girl, wearing leotards and tights w/ pink ballet slippers.Thanks so much for this story it sort of brought back some memories of my childhood. Thanks again love Sissy Ray

I loved your story -- that would be a dream come true for me.  I love wearing leotards and tights and to be able to wear them with girls would be amazing.  

Well, learned a bit about ballet, but it could have a little more interaction with the girls. The sleepover could have been explored, and his feelings when he danced in the various areas.
 But, please more stories in this vein, only a longer, emm slightly more on the "I won't wear that, and that's final" type. How the clothes feel, the way he feels, and his gaining of "a second self."  

I'm glad it worked for you. It didn't work for me. No need to put me down as "cannot appreciate the erotic aspects" or "have yet to experience the rich sensations".
I wish people respected other people's opinions...

This is a superbly written story that exploits the sensuality of dance costuming with its rich descriptions of the sensuous, f3eminine attire used in all phases of dance.  
Thoose who cannot appreciate the erotic aspects of these descriptions have yet to experience the rich sensations that accomapny these practical, lovely and always seductive costumes.
Do write more.
Cordially,
Mardee

Story read like a commercial for the makeup and attire.  Well written but not much substance.  Keep trying...I will keep reading.


Kay

Loved the story! Only problem was the narrartor didn't put up a fuss. This would be my ultimate fantasy but I wouldn't go in so willingly. Great descriptions of the costumes. Maybe someday!

I see lists and descriptions of outfits, products, dance steps, brands... but very little story.