I came to these stories much later than everybody else but I thought they were great. Just keep on writing any others in the same way.
Thank you.

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BAD STORY.

Yes, I have noticed that there is no description of Tish.  That will become a bit more important in a later part.  I appreciate the comments and I'm going to continue to write this story.

Not verynice girls but teens can be nasty & ruthless. Keep writing its just getting intersting. One hting I have no idea what Tish looks like, did I miss it? You need to have a discrition A discription of her.

A very good start. I can't wait for what happens next!

True, with the storms of hormonal change teenage girls are an unpredictable element, but these three don't seem to have much femininity or womanly potential going for them in this story. Cody is now confronted by a trio apparently determined to use his transvestite predisposition to bring him down.

In my heart I'd like to see this story develop in such a way that Cody's upcoming experiences help promote these budding harridans (which is an unusual condition compared to the character of the average woman) into loving human beings, who can accept even unusual diversity as a positive quality in the mortal condition. Go, Blaze. We're rooting!

Thank you for the wonderful comments.  Janine found my typo.  I accidently substituted my name for Cody.  I'm still new at writing this kind of story.  Jashperous Jim pointed out about there not being a body swap.  That occurs later.  Finally, Jezzi Stewart pointed out that there was no transformation of hair.  His hair is currently too short to do anything.  However, that won't remain the case.

Great story,, such a lucky boy to have found a neighbour like that.. Look forward to the two girls getting cruel with him in a later chapter,, keep up the good work and cant wait for the next part

I am a little confused about the race. First Tish asks Cody for a race, yet during the race his name changes to blaze. Please pick a name and stick to it.

Interesting start to a story though.

Where is the body swap?

a real promising start. Makes me want to read more.

A good start to a story that holds some promise. As an alternative to Jezzi's invitation make his/her sister the Evil one and the pair gang up to get their revenge and her just desserts for being such a bitch to him/her.

Good start.  What about hair?  There was no mention of hair in the transformation paragraph, and yet the comment was that he was passable.  Given the bed wetting incident, it might be interesting to see Abby get together with Tish and team up on "poor" Cody.