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Girl of His Dreams
by Jennifer White

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Comment by jezzi Belle Stewart on 06/04/10
Wow, murder most foul, though I don't think Maura thinks it's foul; it's just what needed to be done to get what she wants. She doesn't seem to think in terms of right or wrong, just in terms of getting what she wants with no thought about the effect of what she's doing on the person she's doing it to or to others. She's totally amoral.

Comment by Paula on 06/04/04
great story



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