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Girls in the Band
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Comment by suba me on 12/20/18
OrW3M1 There is evidently a bundle to identify about this. Â I consider you made some nice points in features also. Comment by thruholewizard on 03/05/15
Comment by Silvia (from Brazil) on 02/09/09 Hi Janey! Comment by Abby Rhodes. on 03/07/04 Nice one, Janey. I played in bands (drums) for twenty years and alhough I didn't strike this particulat situation it would have been fun. Then again, the other musicians didn't know whatI was wearing under my jeans some nights.The fighting between musicians rang true and I'd have to say (personal opinion) that bass players in particular overvalue themselves. Looking forwad to another episode. Hugs, Abby Comment by Jane Hudson on 03/03/04 Just great my dear loved it keep up great work Comment by Teresa on 03/02/04 Janey! Comment by Carolyn Renee on 03/02/04 Lovely story line Janey! Please do a sequel quickly. Love & Kisses Comment by Terri Thomas on 03/02/04 Hello Janey...I loved your story honey! As a fellow guitarist and performer, I empathized with the story line. I hope we can get together and jam sometime soon. Stay gorgeous girl and keep on writing and playing music! Comment by LisaElizabeth on 03/02/04 Hi Janey!!! Comment by Sharlee Snyder on 03/02/04 Good story and another implied "should it be continued." From now on, I am going to go to the end of a story, and check to see if it either has an ending or is definitely to be continued in the VERY NEAR future. I am no longer going to waste my time getting involved in a very good story and then be hit in the face with the cutesy, "What happened next will have to wait for another story." As I mentioned to another author, either write the darn thing or forget it and stop wasting my time--Sharlee Comment by vladd on 03/02/04 Excellent story. I like the living a lie theme, and the fact that its in the open is great, they don't have to worry about the men killing them when they find out. They already know. keep the story going |
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