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Girls' Night Out
by Vickie Tern

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Comment by Bruce on 06/29/09
sad. she has to emasculate her husband to keep him and fulfill her desire for other men,,very sad and very mean, he has no say and now he is a 40 yr old half and half and she thinks this is a good thing she has done, completely destroying his self image, imposing her own will on his sexuality and assuming he is overjoyed in the changes. maybe he will be but thats his choice not hers

Comment by SassySue on 09/06/05
A lovely story that was well written as usual.  My minor complaint is that no one could be that naive, not to realize what was being done when Henry's breasts began growing. The only explanation for Henry going along that makes sense to me would be that he was actually a seceret transvestite, but he denied that quite effectively by syaing that he had tried on his Mommy's panties, but it didn't do anything for him.

Nevertheless, it was a very enjoyable story. Thanks for posting it here.

SS

Comment by Juliette Lima on 06/29/05
Well that is one for the tape
A big picture slow to take shape
In to dresses he tugs
Dosed heavy with drugs
And subjected to a case of date rape.

Good writing about evil people
Left drugged and dazed with a creep will
Leave you most dialated
While the old sow is sated
And you get the fluids that seep well.

Comment by Darlene T. on 06/22/05
So this is where the Birthday Present came from. A great story another great one.



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