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Girls Together
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Comment by chocopie on 12/20/18
71xz6M Way cool! Some very valid points! I appreciate you writing this article and also the rest of the website is very good. Comment by crorkz on 08/03/14 HqrbX9 Muchos Gracias for your article.Really looking forward to read more. Really Great. Comment by Sharon on 11/26/09 I loved that story i always slept with my mum and she taught me so much about making love.She was so beautiful and i loved her so much. Comment by Mr. Anonymous Lurker on 02/10/09 Woah...neat story mate but.....the incests was a sickening addition, I think you should dispose of that aspect. Comment by Travis on 12/01/05 Good story. Comment by Lillian on 05/09/04 Lovely story would love to see the complete transformation Comment by Tina Browning on 02/22/03 More, more....! You've got to continue this tender story, and show us more of these "girls together". Maybe there should be limits to the 'incestuous' aspects, but our hero is surely ready to learn so many beautiful pleasures that are both erotic and feminine. Comment by mike on 02/12/03 More .. more...waiting to see what girl "things" they are going to do... Comment by another fan on 02/11/03 Great story. I would love it if you would continue with it. It ended way too soon. Please do a part 2 to the story. Comment by Paula on 02/11/03 nice to see someone else doing a sweet heart warming story like this. Comment by joli on 02/11/03 Wonderful heartwarming story. Can't wait for the sequal. Comment by Fan on 02/11/03 great story keep up the good work. |
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