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Girl U.
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Donna on 09/03/11
A very moving story...

Comment by juliej on 04/27/08
a sharp hard story but it needs a bit of explanation as to how he got there in ther first place good though

Comment by sissy joan on 05/06/07
This is such a sweet story, if only it could happen to me.  kisses and hugs.

Comment by Early June on 06/21/05
Yet another imaginative plot.  Gee.  This was a little far out.  Unless my comparative anat class was defective, I think the testes and the ovaries are the same base only differentiated by hormones in developement. Your method would make it a lot easier than trying to convert existing organs.  How are the potential women brainwashed?
A group of males would tend to combativeness in adverse situations.  You usually cover incidentals better.  the reading was still engrossing and fun. the premise inovative.  Today a class, tomorrow the world!

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 05/10/05
<<  "Because," said Jo, "not only are you being trained on how to be a girl, you're also being trained on how to dominate males. How to make them yours, and how to get them to do whatever you want. Only a person who used to be male can have that ability.  >>

Given the above,  what happened doesn't make sense.    There is no mention of the teachers using force after the basic change, or hypnosis, yet there was no mention of violent rebellion , escape attempts, or attempted suicides from the kidnapped males against something that all of them hated at first; there didn't even seem to be much anger at their captors.  The captors, in effect, did what one of their own said (above) only males transformed into females could do.  But if Jo and the others were themselves transformed males, who transformed them?



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