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Girly Camp
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Comment by Miss Fitt on 11/06/16
The theme is O.K. but the presentation with so many grammatical and spelling errors is terrible. Steve may be correct in assuming that English is not your primary tongue. Don't you ever edit your stories ? Comment by Larry A. Moore on 01/28/16 It kind of nice story. It leave you with a nice fuzzy worm feeling. You don't feel sorry victim that turned into a girl after you read the story. Comment by Steve on 11/13/10 I hope you really want some tips on any problems one finds in your stories to help you improve your prose. In this story it comes across to me that maybe English is not your primary language due to tense structure in your stories or that you got tiered and were in a hurry to finish. I would suggest either MS Word or Word Perfect or even Open Office from Sun software which is free. They have built in spell checkers that would catch those types of slips. They can be set to auto correct any discrepancies for you like on this page if you misspell. Pretty good over all and I want to say thank you for sharing your work. I mean no disrespect by my pointing out the minor problems and only wish to help you be better then you are. I wish you the best and in closing thank you once more for the hard work. Comment by Silvia ( from Brazil) on 02/12/09 It's really a great story, I loved it very much. Comment by Paula on 04/15/03 I believe I read this before but it is a wonderful story. |
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