eLeQz4 Woh I enjoy your content , saved to bookmarks!

jmWdPq Very good article.Thanks Again. Want more.

as per previous readers comments

I agree with the previous readers that Cate was cruel and the story could have been longer.

no further comments from my previous one

the story is a hard one to get down good in retrospect enjoyable but to short far more explanation regired & how it all began but a good read his mother &sister should never have sent him into the mens wearing girls clothes but shoul have supported him more

bobby did excape the mens room but not intack his mind is shot..
both his sister and his mother did not show any kindness to the boy..any mother that leaves a child dressed like that into a mens room or any sister for that matter should be punished .....well written and no cussing or smutt .....thanks   rone  

As the author I am very surprised that reviewers talk about 'evil' in this story and about it 'not being finished.'

The story is a FANTASY, please remember dear readers, woven around Bobbie's feelings of humiliation about wearing girls' underwear and dressing up as a girl.  Bobbie is so ashamed at enjoying it that he prefers to believe that he has no choice and is forced to dress as a girl.  Thus his story.  Bobbie loves and hates being so dressed, but really loves it and can blame it on his female scapegoats if necessary.

As a work of fiction, the story IS finished.  Bobbie survived his scrape in the Mens Room with a few grazes and feelings of humiliation.  He finishes up finding solace in the arms of his mother.  

That's it: boy goes out, boy has adventure, boy returns to his mother.

Many thanks to my reviewers for their comments, however.  If I can help to clarify anything else, please post something and I can respond to it.  

Bobbie838

I just reread this story and I agree with Angel that the mom and sister come off as being evil.  What at first seems tough love upon closer reading turns out to be subtle sadism.  Mom and sis don't really seem to want to reform him as much as to mess with his mind and set him up for public humiliation and even physical harm.  Since this was never finished, that is the impression of mom and sis we are left with.

a good story bit rough for bobby his sister should have left him alone to use the ladies especaially as it was his mothers instuctions

Nice begining to a story that needs just a bit more. Is this your first effort? If so wonderfuly done! If not, a few issues. The age of this child must be pre-pubescent. No bra and the style clothes were for a very young girl. The words supposedly used in thought as well as in quotation were a bit sophisticated for one so young.

The toilet scene was not very realistic and this is my opinion, so please don't take it as a general point of view. I feel that a mother would never leave a child in a public toilet and go on into a store. Especially a boy child in a dress sent to use a mens room. What happened inside with the toughs was realistic enough though.

The so-called ending? I only say this because it just ends. No lead in to it or resolution to what had happened to Bobby.

The story comes off to me as a much more evil one than I believe you intended it to be. The panty check scene was to humiliate as was the going into town dressed that way for his first time.

A loving mother cares for her child, not just force her child into better behavior. There was no love at all in this story. If that was your intent than you succeeded!

All in all a very good story considering.

HUGGLES!
Angel

This kind of story I find appealing, and I liked the handling here; but I felt that the final incident needed a better resolution than what we were given.  Otherwise very good.  I'd like to see more.  --Pervy

Poor child to have such a hateful mother and sister.

great story keep up the good work

I can see how the writer would want to leave things to the reader imagination at the end of the story as to what happen next. Lovely story with so realy tender parts in it.

Good start, but this really didn't seem complete.  What did mom do?