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Goddess Rhiannon
by Wholeman

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Comment by Rhiannon Sara Melton on 06/15/10
Blessings, I loved your story Rhiannon. I did skip over some of the sexual stuff and I didn't think making him a succubus was a good idea (Maybe Put in another realm were its raped and torn apart over and over,Sorry I was in an abusive relationship and A succubus is to good). I was named after Goddess Rhiannon and follow the Daoine Sidhee way. You have the beginnings of a book and I would love to read more.     Love and Light Rhiannon

Comment by Dianna on 05/03/08
As a fantasy buff I do have to point out that Succubi are also known for stealing the souls of men, and are extremely malevolent. Turning him into a succubi would actually make him dangerous, as far as normal fantasy is concerned. But hey, this is far from normal now isn't it?

Comment by Debra on 01/31/08
Gwen I have just  read your  story  about  Rhiannon and Tamara, PLEASE PLEASE tell me that you are going to add more to it... I know that you have closed it but there  is  sooooo  much  more that you could do with  it

Comment by Gwen on 03/05/06
I really loved your story about the Goddess. It was really romantic and fun to read. Great Job.

Gwen



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