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The Godmother
by Jennifer White

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Comment by blah on 12/24/08
Wow, Danielle.  I believe this is a work of fiction.

Yeah, often Jennifer is very stereotypical of men and women.  (With all the bad untrusting men and then the women they get turned into often fit a certain type and become bimbos often).  It's kind of hard not to draw conclusions on what her opinions actually are.  Still, it's fiction.

Sure, justice did not prevail.  That doesn't mean she thinks that justice shouldn't prevail.

Comment by Danielle L. Richards on 02/19/07
Jennifer:

  I can't believe it. Now you are against law enforcement. You feel that criminals should be able to get away with their crimes and that law abiding citizens should be punished for trying to make our world safer to live in. Not to mention putting a bad light on those that work in law enforcement. God forbid you should ever need a cop! I, for one, hope that they ignore your pitiful cries for help. I hope you can live with that. I know a lot of readers of Crystal's who are in law enforcement. I know I speak for them as well as myself that your version of criminal justice is disgusting.

As you can see I am not afraid of your answers as I have left my e-mail address in plain sight.

I am not sure how you sleep at night but then maybe that is your busiest time eh?

Comment by Morgan Thomas on 03/25/06
A familiar story with a nice twist. I also would have liked to have seen our protagonist at work in her new job :)
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