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Comment by gj on 08/29/10 Agree with other commenters even though this is a fantasy the end result for someone who was just doing too them selves and not harming anyone is wrong.I think i remembered seeing story before and skipping over after a quick glance ,like the none justice system does in the story is what i should of done. A life style is a lifestyle and not all are good,or harmless too others SHAME ON THEM...,but what is shown at the end of this story well it really sucks that some woman are put through it forceably. Comment by the unknown on 04/14/10 STOP IT!! stop going on this site and reading these disgusting stories. Comment by lee lee on 05/19/08 Ah 'tis a fantasy ( or nightmare) and as such I give no judgement as to why it was written. But like these fantasies, half-way through I got bored and sorta knew what the ending would be..the terror in real life is that 'whore'houses in this country are often filled with illegal aliens who are real slaves to the sex trade and were forced into it by scum. So as a fantasy the story had a tad of merit but it should have some quality of social justice in it to be palpable. I finished anyway and know that there is a better story in you somewhere. Thank you Comment by Chelsea on 02/24/08 I want readers to know that in no way do I condone Melissa's "profession" for a woman. It is degrading, dangerous, and should not be tolerated in a civilized society. However, for a man who has been turned into a woman against his wishes, it makes a lovely career. With all the ills men have imposed on women over the course of history, it seems like poetic justice for force-feminized men to become the ones who fill the brothels, instead of real women... Comment by Rachel Rae on 05/19/04 I don't see the difference between having to do it as a TV with a male and being represented by a field manager as contrasted to being put into a brothel. Being a fan of enforced feminization, I liked the story line but you and I both know that you just can't grow breasts over the short haul. But I still enjoyed reading it. Comment by Jane Hudson on 04/01/04 My dear I know what she feels in someway's .The other day my boyfriend was beside me in bed My it was so hard to get up and go to work. So I love the story that sort of femmy fun sounds just great and he/she was very happy in the end and why not. Comment by Meeah on 06/06/03 This is a great story--and the author's note makes it that much more "delicious!" I can hardly believe it possible that anyone could seriously be as outraged as they claim in some of these reviews--but then, I suppose, there always will be those who cant discern fiction from reality no matter how many times and how patiently its explained to them. Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 05/26/03 Jenny?!? This story was good up until the ending and then your justification...I think that prostitution should be legalized all over the world...maybe then we can put a stop to forcible rape...did you ever think of that...In Nevada, where prostitution IS legalized, the women have strict health codes to abide by...if the so much as catch a cold, they are out of work until it is over with...another thing too that you don't seem to realize...when American men are caught crossdressing in a country where it is a crime, they are deported after being arrested, tried and convicted...their names appear in newspapers and they are disgraced...this little "you've been convucted" thing and then "you are here make the best of it" is just pure unadulterated fantasy...Not to say that is bad...but do like Aardvark did when he wrote his Jayti Singh story...he did so much research before putting one word down on his screen...you should conisder doing the same...because even though this is a fantasy...there was no research...because in every country I have visited...if you are arrested for any infraction of the law...the US consulate is notified immediately...You need to do more research...hopefully your next story is better Comment by deathsheadx on 05/20/03 im sickened by this, not the story but your justification. that authors note makes it impossible for me to take you seriously as a writer Comment by Tina Michelle Smith on 05/20/03 Jennifer, I have read your story and the justification you apply at the end. It is apalling. To justify in any way the deliberate enslavement of an innocent by an oppressive police state is tantamount to approval of the holocaust. To clothe it in the guise of a TG story is despicable and reprehensible. Comment by Sharlee Snyder on 05/20/03 Ms White, |
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