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The Golden Palace
by Joe Six-Pack

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Comment by Person on 04/23/09
this was a wonderful read! The story captivated,enthralled,and interested me to no end! The theater itself takes on a personality of it's own and is downright magical,both literally and metaphoricly. I throughly enjoyed the entire story no matter how many times I read it (which is about 3 times) and the art complemented the story instead of distracting the reader. Way to go! I am really looking forward to seeing more from you :)

Comment by Alex Warlorn on 09/30/04
I'm sure you remember (as much you don't want to ) from before when I review 'sissy boy' and while the art style is the same, I fell the progress was better marked with the steady flow of nicely spaced images enabling the images to truely be part of the story.
As for the story, personally, I never understood the whole 'change gender, have a better life' thing, we're all works in progress, and we don't know what tomorrow will bring.
As for you writing style, it's as good as before, which is a nice thing by the way. Read ya later.

Comment by Jimmy on 09/16/04
The author reluctantly admits there may be some similarities to Xoop's "Changing for Gym." This may be due to the fact he copied the format almost in its' entirety.

Well, at least you are honest!

Comment by Paula Jutras on 09/16/04
Terrific mixture of images and story. Love how the mind process happens in such a pace the character has no time to realize and react to it.  Ahhh the magic of the movies.

Comment by Pippa K. on 09/16/04
Nice illustrations, great story.  It's a fun and twisted plot.  The best kind!

Comment by Praetor Aurelius on 09/16/04
Fantastic! I love how you mix your witty writing with your gorgeous illustrations, Joe! I'm glad you are back to writing stories! I don't really mind that you copied 'Changing For Gym'... as I quite like that formula, and have been re-reading that story for, like, 2 weeks straight, I love it so much!

Please make your next story a picture-one! :)

Comment by Early June on 09/16/04
A fantastic presentation!  A wonderful tale, elegantly told.  The drawings add to the enjoyment.  Thank you Joe.  The cioncept and executiion are very well done.



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